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9/4/2009 c10 James Birdsong
Great fanfic.
9/29/2006 c10 Metis
This story deserves an ending. You're so very Close!
3/27/2006 c10 1Mikhyel
I love this fic, although I haven't commented on it before now (*bows low* Please forgive me). I'd love to see it updated! I really want to know what Shinobu has to say!
12/13/2005 c10 9Apelles
Wonderful. Interesting, witty, and absorbing. I can't find a better fic in this section.
10/27/2005 c10 10intrasonic
*Very* nice.

As mentioned already, the wide variety of interaction between the various inhabitants of the dorm is one of the defining characteristics of the series itself, and you've done an excellent job of following suit.

I'm looking forward to seeing Shun take a more in-depth look at his own family. Assuing you plan to, that is. But the manga does at least offer some dynamics for Shun's own family (beyond the obvious girl-look thing), so I think it'd be criminal not to.

More chapters can't happen soon enough. Cheers.
4/23/2005 c10 deitarionSSokolow
Definitely a nine-point-something out of ten. I can't find anything to criticize and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Heck, normally I complain about short chapters but, for this story, they just somehow feel right.
2/19/2005 c9 Omen-chan
I'm so happy you updated it! I just about jumped out of my seat when I saw the new chapter!

I love your the way you can grasp the importance of Greenwood as a large family. It's really what ties the story together (that and the shonen ai). So, I'm pleased that there's actually a fic that shows this theme from the manga.

Like any Koko wa Greenwood fan, anything with Mitsuru and Shinobu as a couple or about to become a couple really gets my attention.

I also have a secret passion for the Hasukawa/Shun pairing (which is just too rare in my opinion), so I loved the comments Mitsuru and Shinobu made about them. Totally made my day.

Finish it soon! Preferably with my two favorite couples getting together! PLEASE!
12/8/2001 c8 53samuraiheart
This is absolutely beautiful and very thoughtfully written. Is there going to be more? I really hope so. I love the way you've written the relationship between Mitsuru and Shinobu. You use such beautiful language and descriptions too - everything seems to flow naturally. Great job and I can't wait to see how it all turns out. Good luck and thanks for sharing such a wonderful story.
11/19/2001 c8 Raya
Aaaw, that was so sweet! Although I do think that Shinobu will have no trouble getting damned on his own without Mitsuru's help... ^_^. ANd I liked what you said about the swings, it's true, isn't it? One size fits all and you're never too old.
10/12/2001 c4 ds
the characters are so delicately written. it allows their personalities to show more, their actions and interactions clearly the result of believable thought and emotion. the delicacy and care with which you write avoids any hint of overdone melodrama, which tends to get on my nerves. point is, i _really_ love this!
8/31/2001 c7 Jemma
Yay! This is really interesting! Can't wait until I see more.
7/13/2001 c7 82X-parrot
wait wait wait - where's the end? stopping there is Not A Good Thing. What's going on with Suka? What does Shinobu got planned? Is this going to have a shonen ai slant (I'm hoping, but then hope springs eternal in bird-brains...) I like the longer stories and this one is sweet, looking forward to the end. {O, for future reference, Shinobu can in fact be out-stared. Mitsuru does it in the manga (totemo kawaii~!) ^_^ }

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