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8/26/2007 c1 DJM
Excellent internal monologue! I'm impressed beyond words. What an interesting interpretation of Primera's character. I'd never given her much thought before, but it feels like you've added a whole new layer to the character. I truly enjoyed the story, thank you. Keep writing!
7/3/2007 c1 AzurePlague
Wonderful! I really like how you write! Primera is such a cute girl, but very observate! Good job on keeping her and others in character! *thumbs up*

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