8/26/2007 c1 DJM
Excellent internal monologue! I'm impressed beyond words. What an interesting interpretation of Primera's character. I'd never given her much thought before, but it feels like you've added a whole new layer to the character. I truly enjoyed the story, thank you. Keep writing!
Excellent internal monologue! I'm impressed beyond words. What an interesting interpretation of Primera's character. I'd never given her much thought before, but it feels like you've added a whole new layer to the character. I truly enjoyed the story, thank you. Keep writing!
7/3/2007 c1 AzurePlague
Wonderful! I really like how you write! Primera is such a cute girl, but very observate! Good job on keeping her and others in character! *thumbs up*
Wonderful! I really like how you write! Primera is such a cute girl, but very observate! Good job on keeping her and others in character! *thumbs up*