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9/12/2007 c1 4Duelist925
Haha! I love it. I can just imagine his face if they said something like that.
11/13/2006 c1 9Erymanthos
This is good! I found it funny. :) You conveyed how irked Varden was very clearly... I especially liked

"You try to be a thief

In the dark with shining hair!"

And

"It's the Prince of Thieves, Varden!

His hair's his royal crown!"
10/26/2006 c1 13Glitara Keladry Sophia
Very funny and witty but with a dark side, great job!
10/17/2006 c1 anon
cute poem! made me laugh. :)

and dark varden is so much cuter! ^_^
9/1/2006 c1 Nintii
The poem is very funny you worded it very well.I like the dark Varden better then the white he`s cute
8/29/2006 c1 12Forestwater
Nice. Very funny.

I like dark Varden better though. maybe it's just me, but he seems thinner and smaller with black hair, less football player/wrestler than he does with blond hair.

wait . . . . is it white, or blond? coulda sworn it was blond . . . . i need to ponder this . . .
8/28/2006 c1 Tia
I love this poem, it is so funny.
8/14/2006 c1 Tahn
Hahaha! That was cute :) I love it! Good rhyming and humor. Great job :)
7/29/2006 c1 2ImaPsychoSquirrel
hehe...I love sinister Varden, but he's even cuter when he's blonde and being made fun of for it. nice job!
7/2/2006 c1 1PREscriyed101
“You try to be a thief

In the dark with shining hair!”

lol, that lines my fav, nice poem it flows well and it's funny which you don't get often I love it!
6/29/2006 c1 3DarkChocolate21
I love it! I prefer blond varden over dark Varden, anyway. :)
6/27/2006 c1 FeatherWind
Ha ha, that gave me a laugh!

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