9/12/2007 c1 4Duelist925
Haha! I love it. I can just imagine his face if they said something like that.
Haha! I love it. I can just imagine his face if they said something like that.
11/13/2006 c1 9Erymanthos
This is good! I found it funny. :) You conveyed how irked Varden was very clearly... I especially liked
"You try to be a thief
In the dark with shining hair!"
And
"It's the Prince of Thieves, Varden!
His hair's his royal crown!"
This is good! I found it funny. :) You conveyed how irked Varden was very clearly... I especially liked
"You try to be a thief
In the dark with shining hair!"
And
"It's the Prince of Thieves, Varden!
His hair's his royal crown!"
10/17/2006 c1 anon
cute poem! made me laugh. :)
and dark varden is so much cuter! ^_^
cute poem! made me laugh. :)
and dark varden is so much cuter! ^_^
9/1/2006 c1 Nintii
The poem is very funny you worded it very well.I like the dark Varden better then the white he`s cute
The poem is very funny you worded it very well.I like the dark Varden better then the white he`s cute
8/29/2006 c1 12Forestwater
Nice. Very funny.
I like dark Varden better though. maybe it's just me, but he seems thinner and smaller with black hair, less football player/wrestler than he does with blond hair.
wait . . . . is it white, or blond? coulda sworn it was blond . . . . i need to ponder this . . .
Nice. Very funny.
I like dark Varden better though. maybe it's just me, but he seems thinner and smaller with black hair, less football player/wrestler than he does with blond hair.
wait . . . . is it white, or blond? coulda sworn it was blond . . . . i need to ponder this . . .
7/29/2006 c1 2ImaPsychoSquirrel
hehe...I love sinister Varden, but he's even cuter when he's blonde and being made fun of for it. nice job!
hehe...I love sinister Varden, but he's even cuter when he's blonde and being made fun of for it. nice job!
7/2/2006 c1 1PREscriyed101
“You try to be a thief
In the dark with shining hair!”
lol, that lines my fav, nice poem it flows well and it's funny which you don't get often I love it!
“You try to be a thief
In the dark with shining hair!”
lol, that lines my fav, nice poem it flows well and it's funny which you don't get often I love it!