11/5/2009 c4 Adoxagraphy.Angelus
Omg! Your so good at writing like the actual author, and making a flow work, even if it is an akward flow, it works.
Omg! Your so good at writing like the actual author, and making a flow work, even if it is an akward flow, it works.
11/5/2009 c3 Adoxagraphy.Angelus
Omg! This is so friggin good! And I can't believe that just happened! OME!OH MY ERIC!
Omg! This is so friggin good! And I can't believe that just happened! OME!OH MY ERIC!
11/5/2009 c2 Adoxagraphy.Angelus
Yay! This is good. I mean, a few grammer and puncuation things, but nobodys perfect. Great job!
Yay! This is good. I mean, a few grammer and puncuation things, but nobodys perfect. Great job!
8/17/2009 c6 BubblyShell22
Oh no, this isn't good. I hope things work out for Bridget and that Greta gets better.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Oh no, this isn't good. I hope things work out for Bridget and that Greta gets better.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/17/2009 c5 BubblyShell22
Wow. Nice chapter. Well, Carmen's going to find out sooner or later what happened. It's inevitable.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Wow. Nice chapter. Well, Carmen's going to find out sooner or later what happened. It's inevitable.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/17/2009 c4 BubblyShell22
Whoa. I can't believe Tibby was with Win! Yep, when Carmen finds out she'll go ballistic.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Whoa. I can't believe Tibby was with Win! Yep, when Carmen finds out she'll go ballistic.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/17/2009 c3 BubblyShell22
Whoa. How did Gilda's burn? I'm glad Tibby though to bring the Pants, or they would've been destroyed, too.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Whoa. How did Gilda's burn? I'm glad Tibby though to bring the Pants, or they would've been destroyed, too.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
8/17/2009 c2 BubblyShell22
Great chapter. Nicely done. Does this take place after the fourth book?
The Bubbly One,
Shell
Great chapter. Nicely done. Does this take place after the fourth book?
The Bubbly One,
Shell
2/25/2007 c11 2superstarellie
OMW! This story is so good, you write just like Ann Brashares. Please write more and update soon, I can't wait for your next chapter and to see what happens!
elliex
OMW! This story is so good, you write just like Ann Brashares. Please write more and update soon, I can't wait for your next chapter and to see what happens!
elliex