2/10/2007 c1 3Kelida Johnson
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Wow.
That was an amazing story, the way it ended totally brought it all together!
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Wow.
That was an amazing story, the way it ended totally brought it all together!
9/8/2006 c1 3Ujon Nocturne
fantastic way with the words.
the romance, imagery and humor in this fic is very nice.
the story was so sweet, so cute! i liked it a lot.
please, do update this. ^^
fantastic way with the words.
the romance, imagery and humor in this fic is very nice.
the story was so sweet, so cute! i liked it a lot.
please, do update this. ^^
8/14/2006 c1 Tahn
I love the imagery you do. I can picture her sitting in the rain with him. It's also got a touch of humor and I like that :) Good job :)
I love the imagery you do. I can picture her sitting in the rain with him. It's also got a touch of humor and I like that :) Good job :)
7/29/2006 c1 2ImaPsychoSquirrel
Well, that was definitely fun to read.*sighs in sweet shippery happiness* And I could almost see something like this happening in the comic, although perhaps not the later part of your story (might be a little too mature and visual.) Still, I love how you have Varden just spilling out his feelings and being shocked that Lei'ella returns them. So cute!
Well, that was definitely fun to read.*sighs in sweet shippery happiness* And I could almost see something like this happening in the comic, although perhaps not the later part of your story (might be a little too mature and visual.) Still, I love how you have Varden just spilling out his feelings and being shocked that Lei'ella returns them. So cute!
4/21/2006 c1 12Angel of Nevermore
Hah! You edited some stuff, the actual kiss is much smexier now. ^^
(Ci da reviewer)
Hah! You edited some stuff, the actual kiss is much smexier now. ^^
(Ci da reviewer)