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6/3/2007 c1 9TalkingMime
Nicely written and an interesting reflection on the state of humanity in Inverloch. It works itself nicely into the Inverloch universe without touching the main story.
9/9/2006 c1 bywthedragon
Woah. That was good. You really got Berard down! I'm very impressed, and That's generally hard to do. I tend to be a tough critic, but this... was a whole lot better than I've come to expect form in general. keep writing!
8/14/2006 c1 Guest
very nicely done.
8/14/2006 c1 Tahn
Oh wow! Great job. Good use of words and the action is really well done. Makes you think you are there. But at least we know that Berard finally gets his. Makes the story all the sweeter. Great job!
5/18/2006 c1 1WoLfBoY538
Wow.. All I can say is wow.. That was beutifully written, good action. But I wish there had been a happier ending. *sniff*
3/18/2006 c1 1krycalex
Scary... very scary... I like it! :) You write beautifully!

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