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11/16/2020 c25 Akame
I love your story! Hope you can update soon
10/10/2020 c25 NikaLis
Author, I really like your fanfiction. And I look forward to seeing you release a sequel. Please write a sequel as soon as possible. I am not American, so the translation may not be correct, sorry for that.
9/28/2020 c25 Guest
Please update
8/16/2020 c25 int
I really like the plot of this story, wish there were more fan fiction about the crew watching memories. Loved the warm memories and brotherly bonds too but there were some parts that kept me from enjoying it completely. One of them is your obvious dislike of vivi. You kept mentioning how you don't think that she knows how hard it is to be a pirate simply because she's royalty. How is being a pirate hard? You get to search for treasure and go on adventures so what part is that hard? Zoro and the others were very OC when they talked about that in the story because in the show, they fully appreciated the pressure vivi was in. Being a princess is so much harder. Vivi is responsible for billions of lives. At that point, luffy only has a handful of people he truly cares about while vivi worries about each citizen. She also has to be told who she can and can't be friends with and has to be careful when meeting with other world leaders or it might start a war. Being a pirate is easy because it means being free. You might have your reasons for not liking vivi but she's one of the most kindest and selfless people in the show and, while she's physically weak, she never gave up on her people and continued to fight for them. I really liked how you portrayed robin in this story, she's exactly like how she is in the show. But what bothers me is that she constantly glares at sanji and others when they bring up the subject of girls in front of luffy. She treats luffy like a child when he's 19 years old. It would be weird at this point if he didn't know where babies came from. Robin isn't helping him grow up if she forbids others from giving him the talk. There's also the buggy issue. I don't like him and even find him annoying many times but I don't have blind hatred towards him either like towards akainu and black beard. You resent the fact that he used to be part of the pirate king's crew and that he was friends with shanks. I don't like him but he was there when he rest of the crew wasn't and it's because of him and mr 3 the arc was funny. He's not likeable but was entertaining at least. This might be in my head but when he comes up in the story, it seems bitter. Plus why were people like nami and others freaked out by his devil fruit powers? It makes then look weak and sensitive when they're supposed to be tough pirates. Same with their reaction to trafalgar law's devil fruit powers. They get easily creeped out when they're in the new world, it's embarrassing if they can't handle it. Law's powers is perfect for a doctor because it's used to cure anything. In fact Law is a better doctor than chopper. Law saved luffy's life but for some reason the crew distrust him in the story and look at him with hostility. Other than that, the story was great.
7/25/2020 c18 17CharmGirlLove
You know I have a theory that Usopp’s childhood involved a lot of people talking behind his back of him being a pirates son, kids bullying him and him spending a lot of time alone in his home that led up to all this negativity.

Since he didn’t meet the Usopp pirates til he was 12 and his mom died when he was 7 and if you get to the memories segment I hope you do something that shows part of that.

Though obviously your story your choices, I do hope you come back to this soon though with all the crap that’s happened this year it would be nice to escape reality with this story again.
5/6/2020 c25 Galieiah
Ohhhh are you going to put in Law’s backstory eventually, I know it’s a ways off, but I think Luffy should meet Rosinante or at least have his crew notice how similar they are! Honestly, Luffy is more likely to be related to Rosinante than Dragon!
4/26/2020 c4 Guest
Wouah, you manage to make me hate Zoro, Congratulations.
1/11/2020 c25 exworthben
i have read all the chapters to the latest chapter 25. i would love it if you would be able to continue this amazing adventure with luffy and straw hat gang. please continue.
12/6/2019 c25 XavierMoon
I love your story!hope you can update soon
And i always waiting for your stories,they're really fantastic and i love it so much that i always read your story not once but twice
12/2/2019 c25 clipboardfox22
I love this sort of fic! I also really love how you write the character dynamics- especially Robin and Franky being the (weird sort of) parents. I hope that you are feeling well and know that I'll be here to cheer you up if you need it!
8/16/2019 c25 9Tigerwoman188
Happy to hear you are feeling better
7/24/2019 c25 MoonShadow2003
I love this story and it would be great if you continued it, with the new sagas and Sanji's past.

With love MoonShadow2003
7/1/2019 c25 12creativesm75
nice
5/11/2019 c25 int
You know I like buggy. Yeah he was horrible when he was first introduced but he provided a lot of humor during the prison arc and with luffy worried about ace and the execution, it was nice to focus on. While many were annoyed that he is now a warlord of the sea, I just think it is hilarious that he got the position because of a misunderstanding. He was a member of the famous pirate king crew and was good friends with shanks. He witnessed amazing things while working under Gol D Roger. It was nice to see shanks still having a friendly relationship with him even though buggy wanted to be nemesis. Maybe he doesn't annoy me like he annoys others because he helped save luffy's life by flying him away from akainu. So buggy was also part of the reason luffy got away from akainu as well as jinbei, Law and Koby. Shanks definitely did but he was never really in danger because of how strong he is.
5/11/2019 c25 Guest
You know I like buggy. Yeah he was horrible when be was first introduced but during the prison arc he provided a lot of humor. A character that was around from way back fulls you with nostalgia. He was one of the priate king's crew and witnessed amazing things plus it was nice to see shanks still having the same friendly relationship with him even though buggy wanted to be nemesis. Just saying, while other would be annoyed the he is a warlord of the sea, I just think it is hilarious that he got that position because of a misunderstanding. Maybe I am just grateful because he helped save luffy's life by helping him escape akainu
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