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2/11 c5 Pintipinti
Tnx. Espero lo actualices pronto. Me gusta mucho la historia.
?xitos.
6/30/2020 c5 0.deactivated.0
I can't believe you updated! I'm so happy. I remember reading this back as a 7/8th grader or something. Thank you for this chapter; so glad you're back. :)
6/28/2020 c5 Bluefire Star
Thank you for updating this, even if it did take several years XD
6/18/2020 c5 zahara
You don't know how happy I was to see that this was updated. Thank you so much for your wonderful work. I hope you are able to finish this soon, rather than make us wait years because I wouldn't want that xD. Thank you again and stay safe!
6/4/2020 c5 Guest
trifecta means 3 but you took 4 years insted of 3... but i like it...
6/4/2020 c5 RichkeyZero
OMG! new chapter
thanks for the update!
it's been a long time since you posted chapter 4
I hope chapter 6 won't be in 4 years later
9/6/2018 c4 Lissaslife
So...I know it’s been a couple years... but I would love it if you’d consider writing more to this story! To be honest of been on for a long time but I only just now joined because I wanted to give you the props you deserve! And if your nit up for it now I’d be happy to wait another couple years or longer! Take your time! I would just love to see where this story goes and how the trifecta can be together again.
8/9/2018 c4 Guest
I hope you update soon! I really want to see Zen and Takafumi get back together and work everything out
10/28/2017 c4 Lal Mirch
Still waiting for a continuation..
9/1/2017 c4 Eve88
I love it! It's well written and poor Yokozawa :( I hope you're going to update sometime again?
4/23/2017 c1 GreenLeaf
Oh my T T

Read this on you Bio:
All of the Wrong Moments (Hiatus, possibly discontinued) ~~ Discontinued? But you said if you were discontinuing it, you'd give us warning right? Is this it?
4/23/2017 c3 GreenLeaf
"You gotta know by now that I won't be having any of it. It's not just choosing you above everyone else, I choose being with you over being with no one."

I don't get the part "choose being with you over being with no one." It only made it sound as if Kirishima's with Yokozawa because he had no one else. Idk, should someone feel appreciated when they heard this? D:

Oh my feels.
I hope there's this final chapter with the theme 'making it right'. There are so many 'wrongs' that they should probably sit (or sleep :p) together and talk it out.
4/23/2017 c4 AnnChan
My prev long comment was gone T_T whats wrong with . sigh.

Anyway, please update? They have to resolve their problem. And Yokozawa needs to apologize too. I can see why Kirishima was so upset with him for keeping their relationship a secret (of all people, Takano).
4/23/2017 c4 AnnChan
I was hoping the person at the end to be Kirishima, but it turned out to be Hiyo. But surely, if she's around, then her Papa will probably be around too, right right? *fervently hopes so*

Anyway, we can see that Kirishima really want to keep their relationship so much that he even apologized so many times. In the prev chapter though, I feel that Yokozawa was also in the wrong. Keeping their r/ship from Takano, calling Takano over his own lover (yes, I'm on Kirishima's side, here), and rejecting his sweet gestures. I mean, it's the office, indeed. But there's no harm in letting Takano know. Heck, if I were him, I'd gladly let him know that I've found someone better.

Anyway, I think it's unwise for Yokozawa to be still as close as ever with Takano, it's a bit insensitive (to his current lover).

So, pleaseee update? Help our lovely couple end their fight? :'(
4/23/2017 c3 AnnChan
It's getting so good, and angsty, of course. I'm crying over the scene where Yokozawa left Kirishima, and saying how even the bad weather won't keep him from leaving.

I feel betrayed by Hiyo, though. Seriously, she didn't even say anyhing to her father. Wasn't it her "disgust" that turned Yokozawa away? T_T

Please don't end it here. And I do skim over the chapter 4, only to see that it's not finished there yet either.
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