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4/16/2020 c17 14TheLadyInBlackAndPink
Oh my gosh! I was SO excited and surprised to see this new chapter suddenly pop up in my email! I was worried not knowing if more updates were coming or not. Yay! :D So glad and thankful for you coming back and giving us a new chapter! I read other Dark Angel fanfiction, but your story is among my absolute top favorites. I just love your unique writing style and characterization! I love the humanity you gave Zack here which balances rigid, Manticore-following Max. Now more than ever with this quarantine in 2020, I come back to Dark Angel! It feels so relevant for these times. Thank you so much for sharing this amazing chapter! 3 I was hoping to see more Dean(he's my favorite ever quick-witted, charming, sauve, humorous, insidious evil villain!). I wish he would've been in the show. lol. I love how even in this chapter without our dashing psychologist, you still dive into the psychology of all of this with Zack's thoughts and words! I think that's the most interesting part of Dark Angel that wasn't fleshed out in the show, in favor of more action scenes. I love the humanity and psychology we get in fanfictions. I love your writing of the characters so much and appreciate that this chapter was so much different than Blah, Blah, Woof, Woof! I am so excited to hopefully see more in the future, if you're feeling up to it. Every chapter you write is amazing. 3 Thank you so much! You made my day and this quarantine period so much better! :D 3 I can't thank you enough! I come back and reread this often! - Your writing is magical!
2/3/2020 c12 TheLadyInBlackAndPink
Hi! Still come back and enjoy your story. I love Dean so much! My favorite baddie! Please upload more! :) anything you have is great!
5/28/2019 c13 TheLadyInBlackAndPink
Love this story still! I come back and re-read it just because it's so good! I love the unique characters you made. Dean's my fave. Love the inside look at Brin's view. Hope to see more one day! :D
1/30/2019 c14 TheLadyInBlackAndPink
Great chapter. Always eagerly awaiting more! I love this story and unique characters you've created!
12/27/2018 c16 TheLadyInBlackAndPink
Great chapter! Love all the complex interactions, such as between Brin and her doctors and Brin catching onto the fact that the politics among Manticore's top people might be a little messier underneath the surface. Excited to see what happens next!
8/23/2018 c1 3Ladybug Jess
This is a really good fix and I cannot wait until you write more!
7/29/2018 c15 14TheLadyInBlackAndPink
I hope you keep going with this since it is really good. I love you characters, particularly your original ones! I always check for updates. Excited to see what happens next! This is one of my all time favorite dark angel stories! Great job creating Dean. The actual show would've been so much better if he were in it. His personality and tactics add so much fun and deviousness to the story. I bet him and Alec's personalities would've played off super well with each other!
6/6/2018 c15 Guest
Hi! Really loved your last chapter! Love the character you've created in Dean Erikson! He's charming, witty, and has personality! Which I think the real show neglected to flesh out in a lot of Manticore workers and transgenics. I love that he's unconventional and sees things differently than most of his colleagues. It highlights his intelligence and makes him very dangerous! His charisma seems to cover up his insidious evil, or at least dubious morals, well! Excited to see what he does with Brin and how their relationship evolves! Love that you had Brin describe her relationship with Renfro and Lydecker in parental terms! It's very fitting for their odd and twisted but familiar and close relationships! Very excellent story telling skills you have! :D Fantastic story and I hope to see more, please! :D
4/18/2018 c15 5BlueAngel137
Three really good chapters! Thanks. As always - I‘m looking forward to the next chapter.
Please keep writing! :)
2/7/2018 c13 Guest
So good! The latest chapter was spectacular! I remember now how much I absolutely adore this story of yours! You're brilliant! Please keep writing because you have such great talent for it! :)
11/17/2017 c13 SeaSparkle
So now Max has to grow up and make up her own mind... Where will that lead her in the end?
11/17/2017 c11 SeaSparkle
Since you're asking: I'd prefer ML..
3/5/2017 c12 BlueAngel137
Another great chapter! I agree with you about Lydecker being an interesting, inspiring bad guy. ;-)

Nice to see the scenes play out similar to the real Cold Comfort episode. But with different background.

Looking forward to the nect chapter. Thanks so much for sharing! Cheers, Blue. :-)
2/21/2017 c11 BlueAngel137
I really like your story. IMO Logan seems a bit out of character. He seems a bit cold. I assume it would be easier to imagine if he indeed knew (or strongly assumed) that Max is an X5 and still under Manticore's influence. ... Just an isea. The story and the background of the characters are great!

I definitely like your descriptions of dancing, Normals background and Eriksen as a really interesting character and Max's handler. And I like how she feels drawn between Zack and her loyalty to Manticore. I'm so curious to see how this develops.

I hope you keep writing! Thanks for sharing! :-)
Blue.
2/9/2017 c11 3ViolettBlack
For me, Max/Logan is the only true Dark Angel related pairing with Max in it.
Since Max described her fellow transgenics as her siblings, I doubt that she would start a romantic relationship with any of them. It might have an incestuous connotation from her point of view, regardless if they are really her brothers and sisters in a conventional sense or not. Max was appalled as Zack kinda made her a declaration of love in Logan's family cabin in Blah Blah Woof Woof.
On top of that Max repeatedly chose Logan over Zack when she had to decide between the two men.
I still love and enjoy reading this story! So, please continue writing it.
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