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8/4 c52 Drax
He is not a dude. You're a dude. This... this is a man.
8/3 c32 JustAnotherReaderPlz
Gosh Kilat is cute but damn she's annoyingly persistent. And why must Joshua be so stubborn. Idk, he seems so snappy with these retorts. Seems dangerous especially with this being so close to the incident and all. Just need to grow to go with it and hope for the best I'd say.

And again I love your characaterization of volteer, a surprising amount of patience, understand and roles with everything.

Finally get to see what this job is? Ill give ya this with how you tell these stories, you never know what to expect and it's always interesting.
8/1 c52 Betting Chicken
Hey man just want to say that I'm so far loving this story and just discovered it earlier this week and have been addicted to reading it (staying up till 2AM when I have work at 7AM XD) but I already can’t wait for more!

My thoughts on this chapter and in general are I’ve noticed Joshua use Cynders nickname Cyn and she didn’t get mad at him using it and generally letting him treat her like family, cause only Spyro always calls her that and was wondering if she’s developing feelings for him with the Spyro disappearing right now or is it just me and I'm going crazy.

But I feel like Vara and him would make a good relationship maybe haha, anyway enjoying the story and thanks for writing!
8/1 c50 2DiabloPProcento
Also can you send me your discord in PM's again ? I can't find how you'r nickname is now.
-Diablo Procento
8/1 c52 DiabloPProcento
Also... here is second comment for same chapter just for fun :D

ITs CaLlEd MaGiCTroll face)
8/1 c52 DiabloPProcento
(Respond to your response :D)
1. My mind is as dirty as dirt...it can't be washed or cleaned :D Not even holy water works :DDD)
2. ...Its called magic ? :DD To be honest...i have no idea how am doing it but i think that Fanfiction is broken because of me :DD or atleast my profile is broken :D.
3. Well then it looks like another war againts apes is on the horizon.

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This chapter was great as always,i can't wait for Vara to show her mother that she is made of more than just ego :D Also Joshua is taking this suprisingly well.

Also i think that Vara is enjoying those back scratches a bit too much...(Lenny face)

Anyway as always this chapter was great.I really enjoyed it and I'll be waiting for next Chapter/s
-Diablo Procento.
7/30 c52 22BronzeHeart92
Well, well, did an another chapter did you? Interesting one if I say so myself. Have you watch the Olympics yet?

Btw, what's up with the so-called deities the inhabitants of the world always swears to? Azeroth I cna kinda understand, being a nifty shout out and all. But Egeria? Alona?

Also, regardless whether or not the 'clear skies, steady winds' routine is of our own making or not, it's quite a neat way to get the readers immersed at the story.
7/30 c52 7EndlessPossibilities57
That scene where they were all sleeping together was cute, I liked it, it made me smile.
7/29 c52 2MysteryWriter175
I really really hope there are laws in Warfang that protect children from toxic and abusive parents.

It's awful environment to grow up. And most of all, Vara's affected by her mother.

Let's hope she gets a chance to get away from her family.

It seems it will take a while for Joshua's friends to like Vara.

The thing that intrigues me is that whether Blick would be able to make some of the human inventions. It's a very interesting topic. Might help him get a little bit of respect from his peers and others.

God, I hate obnoxious councillors. It's always them who do not give permission for important experiments.
7/29 c52 13bizzleb
Hey there SI! I aint dead (despite the heat here at home DX)

Yeah we knew Vara had it rough and trust me the idea of any abusive parent sickens me to the core. Just because she didn't have much talent if at all is no real excuse and all I can hope for is that Vara can get away from that kind of environment. (Heck she almost would trade Joshua for the position he's in at this point if you think about it huh?)

But boy talk about things really coming together. All of the great build up of Joshua building these relationships has come to a great head. Seeing them all in an interaction and how they feel about Joshua and how thats all coming together is quite rewarding. Not gonna lie though, as nicely as this is setting up Joshua for some success for this demonstration, I can't help but think it's not going to go 100% smoothly. I mean c'mon this story has me conditioned for that sort of thing. XD

Looking forward for more man!

Peace out,
Biz
7/29 c31 JustAnotherReaderPlz
An after credits scene? I didn't even notice this right away! I hope I haven't been skipping otherswould hate to miss out on this stuff.

Also Spyro is a TSSSSUNDERE. Confirmed lol. I wanna see more of him
7/29 c52 Samo28
Looking forward to the next chapter when Josh can finally show off his progress~ Plus with Spyro not being here to act like a dick, Joshie should have an easier time... easier-ish? XD
7/29 c52 axzknapp
Another one of my favorite chapters. I was smiling almost all the way through. The scene where Joshua, Kilat, Blink and Vara are all sleeping together was especially heartwarming. It's one of those scenes I'd love to see fanart of, but unfortunately, I can only draw stick figures. And Volteer saying "dude" now just makes me laugh. He has to be doing that on purpose, right? I'll see you next chapter!
7/29 c52 Yoshifu101
It lives! It’s so HARD to find a good story with dragons being as smart as humans. I thought I would have to give up my search soon. BUT I won’t I must keep searching while I am motivated. Thank you, I will keep checking if this updates. ONWARD TO GLORY!
7/29 c52 djax80
I don't mind waiting for a good chapter. Case and point we get to see how Vara's life is. Gotta say, I was expecting her to be worse off.

Can't wait to see how Josh's test goes.

Heh, watching Vara freak out over his casual interactions with all the big wigs was worth a laugh or two.

Stay cool out there in this heat man.

-Djax80
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