2/8/2017 c6 18Black Dragon Valkyrie
If you would like any assistance with this story, like sorting ideas or coming up with ideas, I'd be happy to help.
If you would like any assistance with this story, like sorting ideas or coming up with ideas, I'd be happy to help.
3/21/2015 c4 Just In A Flash
I do like the concept you have develop thous far, but I feel that if you stuck with one point of view it would be better. You have several characters you can select from and if you wanted you could separate this fiction into several parts.
I do like the concept you have develop thous far, but I feel that if you stuck with one point of view it would be better. You have several characters you can select from and if you wanted you could separate this fiction into several parts.
2/13/2015 c3 Rachel
Hi Shayla,
I love your story so far, and I do hope that you continue it!
I'll admit as soon as we found out that Ash and Tory had a son, I was interested in what he would be like when he grew up. Also, I really appreciate your character Evelyn. She seems like a real girl with real problems and not overly glamorous like many OC's tend to be. Bravo! Looking forward to more.
-R
Hi Shayla,
I love your story so far, and I do hope that you continue it!
I'll admit as soon as we found out that Ash and Tory had a son, I was interested in what he would be like when he grew up. Also, I really appreciate your character Evelyn. She seems like a real girl with real problems and not overly glamorous like many OC's tend to be. Bravo! Looking forward to more.
-R
1/28/2015 c3 1Defender of the Pen Alexis
I just knew I'd like Evelyn! That conversation in the beginning reminds me of myself since I tend to talk and not listen to what anyone else is saying. Maybe it's just me but I feel like Evelyn and Bas could grow in their relationship if they experienced each others fears. Looking at their connected backgrounds, I think this fic could grow by having Evelyn and Bas grow by having events from the past (enemies, cursed charms, idk) show up again and slowly influence future events like the ride to school.
I got like this sliver of an idea but I don't know how to express it.
I just knew I'd like Evelyn! That conversation in the beginning reminds me of myself since I tend to talk and not listen to what anyone else is saying. Maybe it's just me but I feel like Evelyn and Bas could grow in their relationship if they experienced each others fears. Looking at their connected backgrounds, I think this fic could grow by having Evelyn and Bas grow by having events from the past (enemies, cursed charms, idk) show up again and slowly influence future events like the ride to school.
I got like this sliver of an idea but I don't know how to express it.
1/28/2015 c2 Defender of the Pen Alexis
I like the dual prologue. I feel like I'm going to enjoy Evelyn's personality.
I like the dual prologue. I feel like I'm going to enjoy Evelyn's personality.