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10/1/2015 c1 1skdhjfiowefwenf
Very nice.
7/8/2015 c1 45chisscientist
I don't think there's a lot known about Jenna and Dalamar, so there's plenty of scope for stories.
6/26/2015 c1 lily
Great story!
6/22/2015 c1 12Nontacitare
It's great to see another story up about late 4th Age Mages. Your story made me smile, and I really like your take on both Dalamar and Dunbar.

There are no canonical or stylistic problems with this story. I do have a suggestion, which you are of course free to ignore. In the novels, Jenna has an arrogant streak that didn't always come through here, especially in her first meeting with Dalamar. Of course, the novels only show her after she's completed her apprenticeship, so your portrayal is certainly valid.

I can't wait to read the next installment.

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