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9/3/2019 c15 1Dragonmaster150
Not a bad story. Enjoyed reading what you have so far.
7/1/2019 c1 Suguri
I’m glad you are finally continuing this story. I like how you leave the reader as much in the dark as Elizabeth is on her past, and how she doesn’t even seem to realize she is missing anything at all. She obviously lost a large chunk of her memory (the body dysphoria aludes to that) and it would seem she probably had a child at some point, or at least that is my theory. Maybe she is on this journey for that child? The silence on the subject from her companions frustrates me, but I guess there must be a reason for that, and as much as I wish to know the answer, the subtle hints and lack of and concrete answers is actually true to the original Tsubasa: RC, the people at Clow loved the slow reveal. ;)
Anyway, your writing is easy and enjoyable to read. You immerse the reader into Eliza’s muddled thoughts and feelings beautifully, and if I had any complaints it would be the length of the most recent chapters, as I seem to get through them too quickly. (Not a real complaint, I am happy you are writing again, no matter the length. :) )
Thank you again. I wanted to write a review (I almost never do) because I noticed how little your recent updates have been responded to, and I wanted you to know that there are people out there who do appreciate your effort and your return to writing. :)
5/24/2019 c13 Anonymous
In the original story, I really hated the confrontation between Syaoran and the Ryanban. It was so pathetically one-sided in the villain’s favor, and the resolution to the Koryo Arc didn’t feel earned for Syaoran, and it just came off as really embarrassing. Syaoran just kept getting beaten around by his mind-controlled goons, and Chunyan is the one who foils the Ryanban at the end. I can understand that Chunyan deserved to be the hero, but Syaoran should have at least been allowed to score one solid hit on the Ryanban after figuring out his deception.
9/4/2018 c1 KuKm4
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7/24/2017 c3 Tsubasa Fan
If you ever manage to finish this story, could please give it a happier ending where both originals and clones of Syaoran and Sakura can stay together?
9/29/2016 c62 James Birdsong
Lovely
9/15/2016 c61 James Birdsong
Cool but excellent
9/7/2016 c60 James Birdsong
Good nine chapters.
6/28/2016 c49 James Birdsong
Nice
6/19/2016 c48 James Birdsong
Good four chapters
5/24/2016 c43 James Birdsong
Good three chapters
5/1/2016 c39 James Birdsong
Excellent of course.
4/25/2016 c38 James Birdsong
Oh good two chapters.
4/17/2016 c37 5JeanBlaze
I finally caught up! Sorry I disappeared for a while. You have made really good progress.
It was good to learn a little more about Elizabeth's past. Big Bunny is a good nickname XD
Also, the Omake was a brilliant as ever.
Can't wait to see what more you have in store for the gang in Outo.
4/12/2016 c36 James Birdsong
Cool chapter thirty.
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