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11/19/2020 c4 12Sadhana The Prince
Only four chapters? Come on man! This is awesome! Especially Captain T's internal conflict. However, I feel that it's too easy for Kaname to give up that easily. Hope you continue the story whenever you can.
2/17/2020 c4 Guest
Sigo esperando una actualizaciĆ³n :'vvv
8/25/2018 c1 2PursuitOfDreams
Rereading this brought back so many memories and then I'm about to watch the most recent season so this fic is everything to me right now as a Tessa x Sagara fan.
4/23/2018 c1 Guest
Hello this is Lady Althena, and I would really like to reply on your review (guest).

First, thank you for reading my fanfic! I'm glad you liked it. And I really hope I can add updates soon tbh.

It was indeed risky (and a bit selfish) for Tessa to lie on Sousuke given his condition. She was actually hesitant to do this at first, doubtful that she spoke with Kaname first to do what she thought was right. She was actually became disappointed with what Kaname said and showed to her.

Yes, Tessa would be willing to lie but if you were in her shoes, this is a once in a lifetime opportunity to change your life, to finally fill the emptiness inside you. This is a bit spoiler but eventually when Sousuke regains his memories, you'll get to know how their relationship will be resolved. Please watch out for it~

Again, thank you for the review and support. :)
4/22/2018 c3 Guest
This was a great story, but you'd think that Tessa would feel bad for lying to Sousuke... even if it was for his own good, and above all, Tessa's happiness. It's good she wants to take care of him, but she didn't even tell Kaname about her lie to Sousuke. She just pissed her off by calling her selfish and saying that Kaname doesn't deserve Sousuke's love. All Tessa says is that he has amnesia. I imagine when Kaname finds out about Tessa's little lie that she'll be pissed off even more than before...! Tessa's lie could break them apart even further than before. I bet Sousuke, if he ever got his memories back, would be even more upset and not even associate with Mithril (especially Tessa) from then on. Sousuke would probably say that both Leonard and Tessa can go to hell, or the like. Kaname isn't the only selfish person in this story! Can't wait to read more! Great work!
3/2/2018 c3 Guest
Uh when would ya update again?
2/21/2018 c2 7Lady Althena
Hi Bluelion, thank you for giving me your insight about this. I'm actually a Tessa x Sagara supporter so I think really hard on how they can end up together when I know for a fact that the canon pairing would be Kaname and Sagara (*sad face). Haha!

I actually thought the scenario of Sagara having an amnesia would change everything in Tessa's world, which includes her priorities/principles and would ignite that hidden desire of living a different life other than being a captain all her life. But then, because of her love to everyone at TDD-1, she knew that her happiness with this 'new life' won't last, that she would need to go back as captain. But there'd be an unexpected change with Sagara after this 'new life' that would eventually make them end up together. (Yay!)

Tessa, being devastated in 'A Dancing Very Merry Christmas' light novel when Sagara said he liked Kaname more, left me wondering about Tessa having 'what ifs' of starting over again to that time before Sagara was given a job to protect Kaname. I felt terribly sorry for Tessa that time. (*cries)

I'm honestly not very fond of Kaname's character. Haha. Even though Sagara had this 'first love at first sight' thing to her, I've always wondered that maybe if he had met Tessa in a different circumstance (not being his superior and all), they could have a different relationship now. I can see their possibility at the end of Second Raid, when Sagara was apologizing and somehow (like a love confession to me) confessing how special she was to him. But then, has been hindered by his realization of their ranks, superiority and all.

As for Kaname's character in the story. I admit I went too far with her tsundere attitude. Haha. But later in the fanfic, she would realize this but it's too late for it. It wasn't very too far to happen that she'd show this 'I don't care' attitude especially when she was pissed off Sousuke forgetting about her.

As for Richard Mardukas, Tessa pleaded Melissa and Kurz not to tell a soul. That includes Richard Mardukas. Tessa knew he will be stopped by him the moment he heard about this.

Melissa's character. Well, she treats Tessa like her sister. She was against it at first, but seeing Tessa plead with her torns her heart into pieces. She realized that maybe this could be a once in a lifetime chance for Tessa to be genuinely happy. Same goes for Kurz.

This scenario of Sagara losing his memory, is like him starting over again, losing his memory of Chidori as well. This is like a second chance given to Tessa, to choose a different path, to choose a different life. Just my 'what if' as well so I'm writing this fanfic. Haha :)

But thank you for sharing your thoughts as this could also help me to improve writing the next chapters~
2/21/2018 c3 fencer29
Where to even begin with why all of this seems OOC?

First off, while Tessa may love Sousuke, her driving characteristic is duty. Even when Kaname had been kidnapped and missing for the better part of a year, and the TDD stood alone against Amalgam, she did not take it well when Sousuke suggested they run away together (he had intended it as a joke, but she wasn't amused). Walking away from that would be a betrayal of everything she had worked so hard to accomplish.

Second, while Melisa might have initially been on Tessa's side, she recognized that Sousuke had made his choice by Hong Kong. And she considered Kaname to be both an friend and comrade as well.

Third, even if Melisa went along with this plan, Kurz almost certainly wouldn't. He likes Kaname.

Fourth, you've twisted Kaname's character almost entirely. Even at her tsundere-best, she would became concerned when Sousuke was was missing from school (SHE might want to kill him when he got back but no one else was allowed to do so in the meantime). Having Tessa come visit her when Sousuke had been missing for a time would have been the equivalent of answering the door to find yourself facing a somber-faced military chaplain.

And finally - do you seriously believe that CDR Mardukas would stand by and let this happen? He would probably consider doing so a betrayal of a promise he made to her father a decade or so earlier.

Actually the only one who doesn't seem out of character is Sousuke himself - he's as clueless as ever when it comes to any form of personal relationship.
2/20/2018 c3 Lady Althena
Hi BlueLion, thank you for reading. Can you tell me more why you feel like the chara setting seems OOC? Could help me improve the story :)
2/20/2018 c3 BlueLion
I'm not sure I like where this is going - the chara setting seems very OOC to me ...
2/20/2018 c3 Guest
Interesting premis, update soon
8/2/2017 c2 Guest
Excited for the next one!
5/9/2017 c1 Lady Althena
Yes, just updated! Thank you for reading!
4/26/2017 c1 c.norris
Continue please
8/1/2016 c1 Guest
Will you update on this?
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