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11/11/2020 c5 fart fart
I liked this update and I hope you update again soon.
10/6/2020 c3 Scot
Zeller certainly wasn't a friend of Captain von Trapp's in the movie - they absolutely hated each other!
7/5/2020 c4 Guest
Lovely!

I know you said you wanted to stick close to the story but I would LOVE more inner thoughts from any/all of the characters.
6/9/2020 c1 8IDontKnowYourSignal
Great idea to fill in the gaps using those scenes that didn’t make the final cut. I remember seeing images of both Georg and Maria staring wistfully out into the night, wondering what might be. You conveyed their thoughts and feelings wonderfully. I especially love Georg asking Agathe for guidance. His wife had such a strong hold over him, it’s hard to imagine he could let her go so easily - even when he’d mended his relationship with the children.
So happy to see you’ve decided to continue - looking forward to reading on!
6/5/2020 c4 8MuggleCreator
I like this a lot.
6/4/2020 c3 4CharleyPaige
Great chapter, my favourite kinds of stories are ones that stick to the original story but have an added dose of uniqueness to them. There are a couple of spelling errors with the names and you tend to weave between tenses in a couple of places, but it's nothing too major and doesn't take anything away from the story. I loved it and can't wait to see where you take this!

Charlotte
6/2/2020 c3 2som04
Very intrested to read more.
Loving the twist to this.
Looking forward to the chapters to come.
6/1/2020 c3 Clare
This is a wonderful chapter! I like that you have followed the original timeline/story-line, but then have been brave enough to add a few of your own little twists. And what fab twists they are :) First, I like that you have Liesl confiding in her governess and friend about Rolfe but that when Maria tells the Captain it was just a girly talk and he has nothing to worry about, he doesn't push the issue. That shows how much trust they have developed between them. Second, I like that Maria knows for certain when she looks into the Captain's eyes at the end of their dance that she's in love with him and he with her, because I think that would have been the case, even though she believes it is wrong. And I also like that when the Baroness tells Maria that the Captain couldn't keep his eyes off her, she realises that statement is true and knows she needs to leave, because of her devotion to God and of his to the Baroness. There's no confusion over Maria's feelings, just fear that she's doing something sinful. That's a novel twist and smart writing! Thirdly, I like that Liesl is the one, being the oldest, to warn her father that Louisa and Brigitta think he has feelings for Maria and that he'll need to break the news of Maria's leaving gently. And lastly, I love that Max advises Georg on his woman situation (Lol) and takes the Baroness out of the way so he can talk to his children alone and I also love that Brigitta in her anger is honest with her father and that her father promises not to make any hasty decisions about who to marry without consulting them. You didn't think you could do the som story justice by going AU, but you have done an amazing job here and I can't wait to see what happens next :)
5/31/2020 c3 8MuggleCreator
Lovely! I particularly enjoyed the moments between Georg and Liesl, and Friedrick and Brigitta.
5/31/2020 c2 329TvG
It's great to see you back with an update of your story after all these years.
Poor Captain, he is very worried about the situation in Austria. For him, it must have been crushing to see his country falling little by little because of the Nazis.
Also, the children notice everything, and they saw how concerned he is about everything. I loved how you showed us that.
I enjoyed very much this chapter.
5/27/2020 c2 ladylouisa32
I'm so glad you continue this story!
5/25/2020 c2 4CharleyPaige
I'm so glad you came back to continue this story, I am really enjoying it so far. Good job!

Charlotte
5/25/2020 c2 nanajojo
Great story. Please continue.
5/25/2020 c2 5TheFastFox
not to be rude or anything, but it's spelt "Gretl" not Gretel.
5/25/2020 c2 Guest
Interesting AU! Hope it continues!
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