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12/14/2020 c22 julianne
Wow I'm so glad that I've finally found your story after a long wait. I've been searching for it for over a year. I totally agree with your impression of Daniel's personality. One scene which highlights this is his abuse of Jack after he was forced to destroy the creator of the replicators, the android Reese. He was so convinced that he was in the right he couldn't see the danger to Earth and the Milky Way if she and her creations had been allowed to escape through the Stargate. Daniel's character was allowed to go out in a blaze of glory by sacrificing himself to save the people of Jonas's world. Then Jack was the link between the Ancients and SGC personnel which allowed him to ascend. I also loved that you brought Jack back to Atlantis where his Ancient gene could be fully explored. And I found it especially endearing that he was forced to take the persona of a small child to save the universe. I look forward to more chapters where you can give us a glimpse of his future beyond Homeworld Command.
12/3/2020 c22 LadyMo
I just want to say I love what is happening in the story and this chapter. Your chapters always keeps me wanting more. I think I said this story should be published when finished because it would turn out to be a book you could not put down. Thanks a bunch. I love that SG1 is removing on in different directions but still being there for each other. Moving in different directions can be hard and sad but in this case it is a good thing. The universe is going to be wonderful. Earth will be safe. Now that earth is safe from the universe we need to figure out how to keep earth safe from the people who live on the planet. Again a great chapter.
11/25/2020 c22 63djenie
Excellent chapter! And thorough job of wrapping things up by Jack and Lya (with help from others). I notice that Daniel is still not quite out of the doghouse, and if I know him, probably never will be!
As always, thanks for sharing.
11/18/2020 c4 20Adelled
The picture of the swinging Jack could have been doctored so Jon could use it as a childhood photo. Wouldn’t it be strange for Jon to not have any baby pictures?
11/15/2020 c22 dpdp
Enjoyed. Thank you. Looking forward to more.
11/12/2020 c22 Schatze8210
Beautifully done! So descriptive, I can just see it all happening.
9/20/2020 c21 dpdp
Excellent wrap up for the NCIS gang.
9/18/2020 c21 LadyMo
Thank you for the update at the SGC. Another enjoyable chapter. There are a lot of changes happening and all for the good of Earth and I love it. Sometimes I think we protect Earth so much better from the bad aliens than we do from the bad people on Earth. Maybe one day they will fix that too. Thanks for the update, I really enjoy reading your chapters.
:-)
9/16/2020 c21 63djenie
Hi. Here I am again, the 'jonny come lately' reviewer. Really great chapter. I loved hearing from all the NCIS characters! Ducky is still among my favorites.
Glad you're still writing this, and I look forward to the next time. Genie
9/11/2020 c21 Guest
I really am enjoying this - I love long stories. Looking forward to more..
9/10/2020 c21 Schatze8210
Excellent, wonderfully long chapter! I so enjoy the imagery you create.
9/10/2020 c21 1sam600sx
I absolutely love this story. You have one heck of an imagination. The detail in this story is awesome. I can't wait for more.
7/19/2020 c20 63djenie
Glad to see Jack is back!
Great chapter, and everyone was included. Your imagination really amazes me.
Take care, and I'll be in touch soon. G
6/30/2020 c20 LadyMo
Thank you for this chapter. Another wonderful chapter. I love where my imagination goes when I read this. The imagery that I get with your descriptions are wonderful. I put myself there with them and feel what I would feel if I was there and know what the characters are feelings. I love when I read your chapters. I also want you to know that they are always worth the wait. Thanks.
:-)
6/6/2020 c20 dpdp
Great. Exciting and a lot happening. Looking forward to more.
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