9/12/2020 c26 Guest
I can’t get enough of this!
I can’t get enough of this!
9/1/2020 c26 6Vasilisa Westwood
Hey, are you planning on Changing the whole seige or will you be keeping the plot intact? Thanks, it was a lovely chapter!
Hey, are you planning on Changing the whole seige or will you be keeping the plot intact? Thanks, it was a lovely chapter!
8/28/2020 c1 Purplestan
So sorry if you get offended but I really dislike the "fall into another universe" storyline it's just so boring and unrealistic. I read your summary and it sounded really good but with that I won't be reading. Especially since it's written in first person as well. I really cannot stand 1st person.
So sorry if you get offended but I really dislike the "fall into another universe" storyline it's just so boring and unrealistic. I read your summary and it sounded really good but with that I won't be reading. Especially since it's written in first person as well. I really cannot stand 1st person.
8/12/2020 c26 11d'elfe
Honestly... I think that being surrounded by such brilliants minds such as Fox and Bruce, she had plenty of opportunities to change things beforehand and stop all those deaths. Especially 8 years in the past. Imagine what could have been done during 8 years ? Bane hunted or killed, Talia imprisoned or whatever... Bruce cured.
So I have to admit that I am quite surprised by her line of thoughts, and also that in the 8 years she and Bruce were together, their relationship had not evolved one bit.
But it's your story, and I want to see what you do with your choices. I'm sure I'll enjoy myself reading it anyway, so I'll stick around :) looking forward to reading the rest.
Honestly... I think that being surrounded by such brilliants minds such as Fox and Bruce, she had plenty of opportunities to change things beforehand and stop all those deaths. Especially 8 years in the past. Imagine what could have been done during 8 years ? Bane hunted or killed, Talia imprisoned or whatever... Bruce cured.
So I have to admit that I am quite surprised by her line of thoughts, and also that in the 8 years she and Bruce were together, their relationship had not evolved one bit.
But it's your story, and I want to see what you do with your choices. I'm sure I'll enjoy myself reading it anyway, so I'll stick around :) looking forward to reading the rest.
8/12/2020 c26 Shannyrox101
This update really sets the tone for the next part. I also love how you emphasize that her knowledge is not infallible. Seriously I love this story for her imperfections.
This update really sets the tone for the next part. I also love how you emphasize that her knowledge is not infallible. Seriously I love this story for her imperfections.
8/11/2020 c26 21TheWriter946
Awesome update! Keep the great work-can’t wait to see what happens next...
Awesome update! Keep the great work-can’t wait to see what happens next...