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12/2/2016 c28 1walkingdeadfan101
OMG OMG PLZ PLZ PLZ DO MORE PLZ PLZ
11/15/2016 c1 S.L.Bladewick
I'd like to point out this is in the wrong category. Daryl is in the walking dead show, whereas this is in the category for comics.
9/25/2016 c28 Mrs. Bunnies
Seeequuueeellll
I loved it.
Abosoulley loved it.
In the sequel, this is a bizarre thought, but make it like a year ahead and Riley is pregnant.
1/12/2016 c16 Guest
Omg plz plz PLZ write another chpt! Such a cliffhanger tops to ur bff and u
1/12/2016 c1 Guest
Omg that was a good story. The grammar and punctuation were horrible but overall I loved it. Thumbs up!
12/25/2015 c1 Guest
Btw, I think TWDRox's idea is stupid just because no one would allow Carl and Riley to have sex at that age. In fact, if Riley did give birth at that age, she'd probably die.
12/25/2015 c1 Lexi
R5FanGirl told me that you needed OC's...so here I am. Alison is the OC she wanted me to give you, here you go...

Name: Alison Sanders
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Looks: She has short strawberry blonde hair that reached down to the nape of her neck. Her nose and cheeks are dotted with freckles. She has hazel eyes. She wears a white tank top with a tan jacket over it, jeans, and tan boots that match her jacket.
Back story: Alison was with her friend Janessa and Janessa's older brother when it all started. They were held up in a refugee camp at a mall in Georgia. To Janessa's dismay, Alison and Janessa's older brother started dating. Janessa caught the two making out in an abandoned Halloween store in the restricted area of the mall. Janessa wouldn't talk to her for weeks. The night before the walkers had overrun the place, Alison found out that she was pregnant with Janessa's brother's baby. She kept it a secret from the both of them. When Janessa's brother died, she was the first to break down and the last to get over his death. Before they are taken into the prison, Alison tells Janessa that she is pregnant while searching a gas station for supplies.
Weapons: A machete and a small pistol
Other: Like R5FanGirl said, you can change whatever.
12/25/2015 c12 TWDRox2015
Maybe you could have Riley become pregnant with Carl's baby. Then Daryl would freak out. Riley would try to calm him down and they would have a talk. They end up making up. I think it would be a cute brother/sister bonding moment. I also think Daryl should be there when she has the baby...because being 14 and giving birth is rough. Daryl would comfort her and tell her that it's alright while guiding her through the labor.
12/24/2015 c12 R5FanGirl
Hey, it's me. I'm it right now so I couldn't login. Anyways, I'm here to give you an OC. I'll have my other TWD friends give you some ideas and OC's too, so don't worry, I'm not the only one ;)

Name: Janessa

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Looks: She has long brown hair that falls over her back, tan skin and hazel eyes. She usually wears a white v-neck, skinny jeans, and a black beanie.

Back story: Janessa was with her friend Alison and her older brother (who is eighteen), when it all started. They were held up in a refugee camp at a mall in Georgia. Eventually, like all places, it became overrun. In the process of escaping, her older brother was pulled back into the horde resulting to his death.

Weapons: Colt Pistol tugged into her waistband and hunter rifle slung over her back.

Crush: N/A

Other: You can change whatever you'd like. Expect another review soon...I just texted one of my friends to send you Alison ;)
12/12/2015 c11 Guest
I'm sorry, but this story fucking sucks! I read the rest of your stories too and they just suck. Your grammar is way off and so is your spelling. It's also kind,of boring that you name all of your characters Riley and they all of the same personality. Make a different character! Also, you make Riley such a Mary-Sue in all of your stories. May I mention that 'When I see You Again' sounds too much like 'Dixon Daughter; Almost There'. I'm telling her that you are copying her.
12/12/2015 c10 bello
love the seiries so far keep up the good work!
12/11/2015 c11 bello
maybe you should have Daryl and Carl get in some sort of fight for Riley to break up
11/2/2015 c9 HeartMadeOfIce
I'm going to admit, that my last comment was really mean and I shouldn't have said that. So here, I'm trying to offer you some help;

1: Your chapters are too short.

2: Check over some of your work before you post it, you wanna' make sure that there is no gramma all errors and misspelled words.

3:You should get an editor, someone that checks your chapters and revises or rewrites some of it. Get someone you follow on fanfiction, in which you know that their story is good, and that they're a good writer and ask them or something, because you need an editor. I'd suggest PoppyMax or INFECTEDand IMMUNE, because they're the two people that I follow that are really good writers.
10/30/2015 c8 Guest
Please update ASAP. I'm loving this story. I especially like the cliffhanger that u left us at. Don't let likeaboss get u down!
10/24/2015 c1 HeartMadeOfIce
I'm sorry, but this story just sucks.

1: You're character is such a Mary-sue! She cannot just climb 19 feet and start jumping from tree to tree. Then later in the book she starts dating Carl, which is another Mary Sue thing. Then, in the latest chapter, she shot walkers without even missing!

2: Your grammar and spelling his horrible! Ever check your work before you post?

3: This is Daryl's sister, yet, everything is focused about your character and Carl.

4: Everything is so rushed! You need to take your time. If you don't have any time to make a chapter then don't make a chapter at all. Fanfic requires your time and effort.

You need to learn how to write before you write at all!
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