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10/17/2020 c7 29MBAV fan66
And Ethan strikes again. Twice! First, he threatens Erica and then later on he winds up killing the guy who tried to rob him after leaving the store. Poor Ethan. His life has become nothing but a big giant mess it seems ever since he became a vampire. At least, he now knows why he's so different and so violent, though. Because he's a Noblest vampire, a kind of vampire that was thought to be long since extinct and is known for their violent and cruel nature. Even towards their fellow vampires of a lesser bloodline than theirs. I wonder just how long Ethan can manage to hang on to his humanity before he fully gives in to his kind's true nature? I'm sure with Anna now making her presence known to him isn't going to help him keep hold of his humanity long enough until he can find a cure, very much, either. Lol!

I kinda suspected it was Anna all long, who was the mystery shadow figure but I wasn't totally sure, though. But now I am! Lol! :D As for why Adam and Jake keep showing up, I have no clue about that one. Sarah will probably feel really disappointed in Ethan and sad for him, too, when she finds out that he's the vampire that she's been looking for. She probably even won't be able to bring herself to do what she said she'd do once she finds him, too. Which was to kill the vampire who's been going around killing innocent people.

Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Like, what Anna wants with Ethan, since this chapter left on a cliffhanger at that part of the story! :D
4/19/2020 c1 Guest
This in love with two person is the most stupid shit and the most overused garbage plotline ever. If you really loved the first one, you wouldn't have fallen for the second, dumbass. And, women should not fight over a man. That's pathetic. And, if your boyfriend fucked another woman, as a woman the best thing you could do for yourself is leave his ass. This type of shit just downgrades women. Eww.
12/8/2019 c6 amabel
mira quisiera que me digas si al final ethan y sarah estaran juntos. La historia se ve buena pero que ethan no sea siempre el centro de antecion ya que sarah necessita que otra persona la reconquiste para que de pelea a ethan si es que la quiere recuperar. Espero que lo agarres como consejo
11/23/2019 c6 Queenbrowniecookie
please update
11/11/2019 c6 MBAV fan66
That chapter was gruesome! But in a good way, though! Lol! Ethan's really starting to loose it, now! First he attacked his mom in the last chapter and now he attacks his best friend in this one! Then later he winds up killing some poor innocent girl, who was only trying to help him! And to top it off, Sarah found out about him sleeping with Gabriella! And as a result she ended their relationship! Lol! Poor Ethan. His life is starting to fall to pieces, now. Lol!

So, apparently Ethan is some kind of super powerful vampire that was thought to be long since extinct. That explains why he's been acting the way he has, lately. Oh! And apparently Rachel winds up having a vision about Benny getting killed by someone, too! Though, I'm pretty sure I know who the guy is that killed Benny in the vision, is. *giggles* ;P

Great chapter! :D
2/21/2019 c5 ana
cuando vas a volver a escribir. Sabes a mi no me gusta que ethan tuviera sexo con gabriella y si va a ser al final etharah a mi me gustaria que colocaras un nuevo personaje como hubiera un hermano de jesse secreto que nadie sabia ni el propio jesse y el quiere enemorar a sarah para la trama se concentre un poco mas en sarah y asi se pueda ver los celos de ethan. Respodeme lo mas antes posible
1/17/2019 c1 rosa
no me gusta el personaje de ethan el nuca le fallaria a sarah y ademas de que ellos deben demostrar su amor a traves del mal y si no al menos coloca un nuevo personaje que este enamorado de sarah para que le de celos a ethan y asi los dos lucharian por ella
y ademas la pareja rory y erica se ve aburrida
12/25/2018 c5 MBAV fan66
Sarah's gonna be SO angry at them when she finds out about them having sex together behind her back, like that! Lol! ;P

I can't believe Ethan just fed off his own mother like that! At least, he didn't kill her, though, like the rest of his victims. So, that's a plus. Right? Lol! :P

Anyways, to answer your question (or rather 'questions'), I didn't get anything for Christmas this year. But that's because we're all busy preparing to move into a house this week. So, moneys a little tight right now. But I'm cool with that! :) To be honest, I was really shocked that Ethan and Gabby just did that! Lol! I was so not expecting that! Lol! I think at first they're gonna flip when they realize what they just did. I don't even know which ship I like better! Ethan/Sarah or Ethan/Gabby! Lol! I guess, as long as Ethan is happy with whoever he chooses, then I'll be happy. :) It was the connection again, is why they were acting so out of character that time around (and landed in bed with which other, too). Lol! ;P And as for learning the mystery person's identity?...Yeah! I've got nothing, on that one. :/ Lol! XD Guess, I'll just have to wait and see to find that one out! Huh?! :D

Great chapter! And merry Christmas, too! :D
1/23/2018 c4 ashley164
This is such a good chapter, please update!
12/2/2017 c4 MBAV fan66
Great chapter! I loved it! :D

So, poor Ethan is starting to revert back to his evil ways, again, eh? Lol! At least, the killing part that is. His attitude and personality is still the same though, but it's just the hunger and being easily angered part (causing him to want to kill them for their insolence towards him) that's back again. And now, to make matters worse his girlfriend, Sarah, is now hunting him down and wants to kill him for being a killer vampire, but she doesn't know that it's really him doing all the killings around town.

Poor Ethan. He's got so much on his plate to worry about. Him losing control frequently over his vampire urges. Being in love with two different women. His girlfriend hunting him down to stop some rogue evil vampire from killing innocent people, without her even knowing that the vampire she's after is really him. Having to lie everyday to his parents about his vampirism. And then there's hidden problem that's he doesn't even know about yet, with their being somebody lurking in the shadows watching him, who obviously wants him to be evil and to join them. Lol! I bet if he could, Ethan would go back in time and stop himself from ever going on that date with Anna. Since that's when all this trouble began. At least, the vampire stuff, anyways. He'd probably still have the conflicting feelings between Sarah and Gabe, though, even if he was still human. But at last...he can't. So, it is what it is. Lol! ;P
1/3/2017 c3 MBAV fan66
That's not good Ethan if you keep blacking out every time you get really angry at someone who cross you or a loved one the wrong way. Perhaps those nightmares aren't just nightmares, after all. I bet this mystery person knows what's going on with Ethan considering they seemed a bit pleased when they saw him kill those jocks earlier.

Well my Christmas and New Year's went pretty darn well, actually. :) I got a scarf with matching gloves and hat, a pair of snow boots, and a new video game. Didn't really do anything for New Year's though, but that's ok with me. I never really do anyways. :P

Anyways, great chapter like always! And I can't wait for the next! :D
1/3/2017 c3 58TiredOfBeingNice
wowza. that was intense. i can't believe ethan killed people...and this gabriella/ethan thing is really getting me conflicted as well. gahhhh there's just too much — can't wait for the next chapter XD
3/21/2016 c1 della weir
good, but why SMITH?!
3/21/2016 c1 eve
it's not "Reader's Pov" it's "Third Person View"
3/21/2016 c2 29MBAV fan66
A new character! And she's gonna be Benny's love interest! Yes! He finally get's himself a girl, since everyone else seems to be paired up, but him! Lol! :P

I wonder what this strange connection is that Ethan feels towards Gabby, is? Hmm...*starts to go into deep thinking mode*:P

Watch out gang! Someone from your past is back and is gunning for your lives! Well, except for Ethan's that is. Lol! Instead, they just want him to be theirs. Lol! I have a feeling its Anna, who's returned.

I can't wait, after reading that little preview for the next chapter! :)
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