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10/24/2020 c28 66notwritten
Interesting. Keep smiling.:-)
10/3/2020 c22 5shoppe69
Oh please, I totally enjoy this story! I never thought Jareth a villain goblin king. Just a bit... creepyIn my view he is a deeply lonesome creature but the movie never revealed anything about his past. So feel free to make up any lore about why he is alone. A curse is a good start. A girl that breaks the curse is great. Now find a reason for the curse (maybe a disgruntled ex-lover or maybe it's the labyrinth itself?) and let this Sarah see his pain of loneliness. Maybe the way to love is empathy . Maybe the labyrinth wants a queen and therefore threw the curse his way because he always refused to share the power? Have fun guessing!
10/2/2020 c21 GracieReads2715
Is this the end?
10/1/2020 c21 Margot Grazyna
Nie, to si nie moe tak zakończy, teraz nastpi waciwa cz opowieci- ta na któr tak czekam, na niezliczone trudy i niebezpieczeństwa które musi przej Sarah aby ocali Króla
11/6/2016 c18 Guest
Dammmmnnn this is so good! Update asap
10/9/2016 c17 Guest
Love this update!
3/23/2016 c16 2AlyNiki
Keep writing! Loving it so far.
2/17/2016 c14 Guest
I really like it, I hope the ending is different though :0
2/16/2016 c14 alexc1209
Yeah, our favorite fox has made his entrance.
1/25/2016 c1 BewilderedFemale
This is a really good start, I'm anxious to read your other chapters!
1/22/2016 c10 CRooster
You don't know how exciting it is to see my email light up on my phone that another chapter has been posted. LOVE IT. I am really seeing more of Jareth's pain and love that this Sarah seems to be progressing so much quicker. Thank you!
1/21/2016 c9 CRooster
Oh I am loving it. Can't wait to see what else you can add on to Sarah as a development and to Jareth to see more from his point of view, crying about his doubts of the affections from his first Sarah!
1/20/2016 c8 alexc1209
My guess is that the Sarah of this story is not the same one from the movie? Can't wait to see how this will turn out.
1/17/2016 c7 Liz
Very interesting and original. Will follow.
1/19/2016 c7 CRooster
Oooo. Love that you gave him the name... David. I also love the fact he lives nearby and why not wish for herself to be taken away? Is it not allowed and btw I would be so embarrassed to see him again just like Sarah especially after my dream. I did exactly what she did blush and wonder how told fill conversation. Loving this GREAT JOB!
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