10/3/2020 c22 5shoppe69
Oh please, I totally enjoy this story! I never thought Jareth a villain goblin king. Just a bit... creepyIn my view he is a deeply lonesome creature but the movie never revealed anything about his past. So feel free to make up any lore about why he is alone. A curse is a good start. A girl that breaks the curse is great. Now find a reason for the curse (maybe a disgruntled ex-lover or maybe it's the labyrinth itself?) and let this Sarah see his pain of loneliness. Maybe the way to love is empathy . Maybe the labyrinth wants a queen and therefore threw the curse his way because he always refused to share the power? Have fun guessing!
Oh please, I totally enjoy this story! I never thought Jareth a villain goblin king. Just a bit... creepyIn my view he is a deeply lonesome creature but the movie never revealed anything about his past. So feel free to make up any lore about why he is alone. A curse is a good start. A girl that breaks the curse is great. Now find a reason for the curse (maybe a disgruntled ex-lover or maybe it's the labyrinth itself?) and let this Sarah see his pain of loneliness. Maybe the way to love is empathy . Maybe the labyrinth wants a queen and therefore threw the curse his way because he always refused to share the power? Have fun guessing!
10/1/2020 c21 Margot Grazyna
Nie, to si nie moe tak zakończy, teraz nastpi waciwa cz opowieci- ta na któr tak czekam, na niezliczone trudy i niebezpieczeństwa które musi przej Sarah aby ocali Króla
Nie, to si nie moe tak zakończy, teraz nastpi waciwa cz opowieci- ta na któr tak czekam, na niezliczone trudy i niebezpieczeństwa które musi przej Sarah aby ocali Króla
10/9/2016 c17 Guest
Love this update!
Love this update!
2/17/2016 c14 Guest
I really like it, I hope the ending is different though :0
I really like it, I hope the ending is different though :0
1/22/2016 c10 CRooster
You don't know how exciting it is to see my email light up on my phone that another chapter has been posted. LOVE IT. I am really seeing more of Jareth's pain and love that this Sarah seems to be progressing so much quicker. Thank you!
You don't know how exciting it is to see my email light up on my phone that another chapter has been posted. LOVE IT. I am really seeing more of Jareth's pain and love that this Sarah seems to be progressing so much quicker. Thank you!
1/21/2016 c9 CRooster
Oh I am loving it. Can't wait to see what else you can add on to Sarah as a development and to Jareth to see more from his point of view, crying about his doubts of the affections from his first Sarah!
Oh I am loving it. Can't wait to see what else you can add on to Sarah as a development and to Jareth to see more from his point of view, crying about his doubts of the affections from his first Sarah!
1/20/2016 c8 alexc1209
My guess is that the Sarah of this story is not the same one from the movie? Can't wait to see how this will turn out.
My guess is that the Sarah of this story is not the same one from the movie? Can't wait to see how this will turn out.
1/17/2016 c7 Liz
Very interesting and original. Will follow.
Very interesting and original. Will follow.
1/19/2016 c7 CRooster
Oooo. Love that you gave him the name... David. I also love the fact he lives nearby and why not wish for herself to be taken away? Is it not allowed and btw I would be so embarrassed to see him again just like Sarah especially after my dream. I did exactly what she did blush and wonder how told fill conversation. Loving this GREAT JOB!
Oooo. Love that you gave him the name... David. I also love the fact he lives nearby and why not wish for herself to be taken away? Is it not allowed and btw I would be so embarrassed to see him again just like Sarah especially after my dream. I did exactly what she did blush and wonder how told fill conversation. Loving this GREAT JOB!