10/12/2018 c18 Katoptris12
So we get to see a flattooth's POV? Im Guessing they didnt kill her, then?
So we get to see a flattooth's POV? Im Guessing they didnt kill her, then?
3/13/2018 c14 Scarla
Can you please continue this? I'd kinda like to see what happens if they stay at the city or if they keep going and try to find a way back to their old form.
Can you please continue this? I'd kinda like to see what happens if they stay at the city or if they keep going and try to find a way back to their old form.
11/24/2016 c12 TheGrandNil
This seems stupid compaired to your redwall fanfictions. They were awesomer, I'm not asking you to stop this fic, I just want you to continue writing the redwall/d&d and redwall/balto fanfics (the d&d crossover has so few d&d ties thai it could be posted on the normal fanfic page that has a lot more traffic than lbt fanfic page)
This seems stupid compaired to your redwall fanfictions. They were awesomer, I'm not asking you to stop this fic, I just want you to continue writing the redwall/d&d and redwall/balto fanfics (the d&d crossover has so few d&d ties thai it could be posted on the normal fanfic page that has a lot more traffic than lbt fanfic page)
6/19/2016 c11 1TheSonicJG
Wow. I usually really like stories like this where the gang are turned into predators but this one truly has the potential to go somewhere truly standalone and unique. Please continue this story, im excited to see where it goes.
Wow. I usually really like stories like this where the gang are turned into predators but this one truly has the potential to go somewhere truly standalone and unique. Please continue this story, im excited to see where it goes.
4/10/2016 c8 Guest
I like it. Totally catching pack life . Maybe they will meet another pack or mating season will come. Keep writing so I don't have to keep guessing!
I like it. Totally catching pack life . Maybe they will meet another pack or mating season will come. Keep writing so I don't have to keep guessing!
4/2/2016 c8 Guest
Thank you for not killing her! Will she join the pack at some point? Also can they ever go back to their original species?
Thank you for not killing her! Will she join the pack at some point? Also can they ever go back to their original species?
3/19/2016 c7 JJP007
I like it :) although since they have met before why did they not recognize Rhett?
I like it :) although since they have met before why did they not recognize Rhett?
3/16/2016 c7 Guest
Please don't kill Ali
Please don't kill Ali