11/22/2006 c3 11Firelord Lionheart
Well, I'm glad I found this fic. And after 6 years you decide to update... I like stories of the Lacan era, and you're portrayingthe characters quite well. I especiall like your version of Krelian.
Now, this is a bold request I know, but can you take a look at my Xenogears novelization?
Well, I'm glad I found this fic. And after 6 years you decide to update... I like stories of the Lacan era, and you're portrayingthe characters quite well. I especiall like your version of Krelian.
Now, this is a bold request I know, but can you take a look at my Xenogears novelization?
2/5/2003 c2 4Rivven
Actually, I do still have my work for the later chapters of the story and I hope to pick up on finishing something soonish:) I just been terribly busy for quite a while now, and focused on other things. But I still enjoy the concept behind this story and do hope to finish. Chapter 4 has been an irritation to me for a while, as it's a sort of transitional chapter. It's nice to know people still check this out, so I'll see what I can do about it:D Thanks!
Actually, I do still have my work for the later chapters of the story and I hope to pick up on finishing something soonish:) I just been terribly busy for quite a while now, and focused on other things. But I still enjoy the concept behind this story and do hope to finish. Chapter 4 has been an irritation to me for a while, as it's a sort of transitional chapter. It's nice to know people still check this out, so I'll see what I can do about it:D Thanks!
2/5/2003 c2 Nephalim CelesTerra
Words can not describe the greatness of this fic! Anyone who's planning to write a Xenogears fic should read this fic to have an example of a truly excellently written and absolutely flawless fic! It only saddens me a lot that you probably aren't going to continue with this story...I saw that this fic is quite old and not updated for a whole while...:( :(
Words can not describe the greatness of this fic! Anyone who's planning to write a Xenogears fic should read this fic to have an example of a truly excellently written and absolutely flawless fic! It only saddens me a lot that you probably aren't going to continue with this story...I saw that this fic is quite old and not updated for a whole while...:( :(
2/5/2003 c1 Nephalim CelesTerra
Wow, this the best Xenogears fic I've ever read! *adds this fic to her favourite stories list* Elly and Fei are my favourite videogame couple and the Lacan and Sophia reincarnations really fascinate me, I always thought the Lacan and Sophia reincarnations were the most interesting of all the Antitype and Contact reincarnations! The characterizations in this fic are excellent! You're truly a talent writer!
Wow, this the best Xenogears fic I've ever read! *adds this fic to her favourite stories list* Elly and Fei are my favourite videogame couple and the Lacan and Sophia reincarnations really fascinate me, I always thought the Lacan and Sophia reincarnations were the most interesting of all the Antitype and Contact reincarnations! The characterizations in this fic are excellent! You're truly a talent writer!
9/22/2001 c2 8Viviane Latour
You know, I really would have liked to hear more about Sophia, Lacan, and Krelian outside of the background of the war during the game. This fic does a good job of filling in those gaps, and it's more lighthearted than the game, though not ridiculously so. I hope you continue this.
You know, I really would have liked to hear more about Sophia, Lacan, and Krelian outside of the background of the war during the game. This fic does a good job of filling in those gaps, and it's more lighthearted than the game, though not ridiculously so. I hope you continue this.
5/5/2001 c2 Steve
Cool fic so far. This is pretty good, although Im still only at the beginning of disc 2 and dont know every detail just yet, I must say this is quite good and Im looking forward to chapter 4
Cool fic so far. This is pretty good, although Im still only at the beginning of disc 2 and dont know every detail just yet, I must say this is quite good and Im looking forward to chapter 4
4/20/2001 c2 Marina
Wow, that?s really good! I like it. Now stop torturing us and write some more chapters, will you? :o)
Wow, that?s really good! I like it. Now stop torturing us and write some more chapters, will you? :o)
3/25/2001 c1 Septhiroth
Its about time we got some more info on Lacan...The game only gives ya the highlights...Good job on capturing the image of -mother- and Lacan. Im looking foward to chapter four.
Its about time we got some more info on Lacan...The game only gives ya the highlights...Good job on capturing the image of -mother- and Lacan. Im looking foward to chapter four.
1/28/2001 c1 Dave
When can i get chapter 4?
When can i get chapter 4?
1/28/2001 c1 Dave
The last line.
he remembered it, he painted it, he loved it, he killed it, it drove him insane.
just my thoughts
The last line.
he remembered it, he painted it, he loved it, he killed it, it drove him insane.
just my thoughts
12/26/2000 c1 bookworm
Yay at last a Fei/Elly fic (well sort of)! I really liked the game, your story's really good too! Keep it up!
Yay at last a Fei/Elly fic (well sort of)! I really liked the game, your story's really good too! Keep it up!