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10/8/2019 c4 31YoungTakinom
I felt so much from this chapter, I’m not sure how I feel.
10/7/2019 c4 6Shepherdboy17
That was so unexpected. I did not expect Don hold the priest hostage and go back on his penance. Will he ever atone before it’s too late and visit his mother? May God watch over Don and protect him. Good job.
10/6/2019 c3 31YoungTakinom
I love how the captain was worried about his mother.
It was funny how they could steal a ship without anyone noticing.
10/6/2019 c3 6Shepherdboy17
Very dramatic and interesting. You make it sound so dramatic how Karnage’s traumatic childhood lead him to a life of crime. However, I feel like he should go to confession, pray for forgiveness, track the whereabouts of his mother, tell her that he loves her still and leave her a substantial amount of money to help her. Good job.
5/4/2016 c1 Ray
Karny should find himself a girl.
1/26/2016 c2 31YoungTakinom
So that's how they met, and now they've got themselves into trouble. It's going to be so funny to see them running from the cops when they find out who was responsible for the stealing, assuming that's where you're going with this.
12/28/2015 c1 YoungTakinom
I would like to believe all 'bad' people just have scars, but I wouldn't wish that on anybody. Don probably would have been a great guy if it wasn't for all that.
Personally I like the way you ended this chapter; it would be nice to get some backstory on these characters.

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