1/14 c14 Leann Nickerson
This was great! Loved all fourteen chapters! Just found this story! Am loving it! Can't wait for the next installment! Thanks so much for your time and effort in writing this!
This was great! Loved all fourteen chapters! Just found this story! Am loving it! Can't wait for the next installment! Thanks so much for your time and effort in writing this!
12/24/2020 c14 33Psyched
The fact that Deeks doesn't shrug Brandel's voice off with his own thoughts, and instead hears his father-in-law's voice defending him breaks my heart a little. Like he can't or won't stand up for himself, but somewhere deep down knows that Kensi, via her father in this case, will always have his back. *sniff* Beautiful!
The fact that Deeks doesn't shrug Brandel's voice off with his own thoughts, and instead hears his father-in-law's voice defending him breaks my heart a little. Like he can't or won't stand up for himself, but somewhere deep down knows that Kensi, via her father in this case, will always have his back. *sniff* Beautiful!
12/8/2019 c13 Psyched
This was so sweet, and I would love to see it on the show. Why can't Deeks and Kensi get a troubled young waif of their own-why does only Callen get one?
This was so sweet, and I would love to see it on the show. Why can't Deeks and Kensi get a troubled young waif of their own-why does only Callen get one?
12/5/2019 c13 typroctor-ewaguy
I'm not surprised Deeks wanted to help the boy. Deeks has a sort of innate friendliness and a non-threatening demeanor especially when it comes to children and of course Kensi.
I'm not surprised Deeks wanted to help the boy. Deeks has a sort of innate friendliness and a non-threatening demeanor especially when it comes to children and of course Kensi.
12/5/2019 c8 Loads of Randomness
Always loved the relationship between these two and you write it well
Always loved the relationship between these two and you write it well
12/5/2019 c13 35Bluenet13
I'm sooo happy to see you back and with such a great story! You got right to what I believe is Deeks' main desire in helping people he can actually relate to and who otherwise would get no help at all. He might enjoy saving the world on a daily basis but helping a little boy and his family is what he's all about. I also loved the line about the small window and that last part of Deeks helping Trevor with his homework and Kensi knowing that's a look into their future. Hope to see you back with another story soon but I know how it goes, so no pressure, just know your writing is appreciated.
I'm sooo happy to see you back and with such a great story! You got right to what I believe is Deeks' main desire in helping people he can actually relate to and who otherwise would get no help at all. He might enjoy saving the world on a daily basis but helping a little boy and his family is what he's all about. I also loved the line about the small window and that last part of Deeks helping Trevor with his homework and Kensi knowing that's a look into their future. Hope to see you back with another story soon but I know how it goes, so no pressure, just know your writing is appreciated.