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12/27/2020 c101 Mana16
At least the disguises are working, a nice way to work around the 'not be seen by important people rule'. Its also nice for Juliette and Andy to have some fun before things go down. Happy late holidays by the time I review this, lol.
Have you seen the new youtube video of Butch Hartman making a what if? Like what if Danny had a secret older brother, Flynn Fenton? While interesting, I much prefer if it was in a reboot then a continuation. Because if Jack and Maddie Fenton did had a 10yr old son who got kidnapped by a ghost, it would have been hinted at (to the audience for a while at least) so the build up would be significant later plus adding a layer to the show, and an explanation for their hostile attitude towards ghosts. Also knowing their personalities, while Jack would be more lenient because he's...well Jack lol, I would totally see that Maddie would've absolutely forbid Jazz and Danny from the their basement lab just because of what happened (up until the series that is which Maddie could at least trust her kids to a degree). What do you think?
Til next time.
12/23/2020 c101 31Dp-Marvel94
I'm happy they managed to find a loop hole to the can't be seen rule. it let them walk around freely and it let Andy interact with his friends. I overall like the scene in the mall. Andy and Juliet pretending to be parent and child was funny. And the lunch lady showing up was cool. I'm glad we got s glimpse of the Danny of this world. I'm not surprised that our Andy was worried about him fighting alone even if that wasn't his Danny. And lastly the conversation between the two Andy's...that was really interesting.
12/22/2020 c101 7RedHood001
I love the conversation that happened between this Dimension's Andy and our Andy. Even though things were kept a bit vague, I love the sense of mystery we get from the way things are going in this world. Andy's curiosity is understandably peaked since his other self is being vague about his own situation.

I actually like the age gap here. Other than the obvious change of Andy being stuck in the void, this world's timeline is happening a little farther into the future. So we get some information on how the world (this one at least) is going. So far the future events have been bleak with Dan Phantom and Corrupted Danny and Andy. It's a bit refreshing to see a more stable timeline. I know we got one where Andy doesn't exist and Danny is being taken care of by Clockwork but that's already close to the original.

Oooooooh, so this Andy doesn't have the emblem. Wait, but that brings up more questions. And the fact that this Andy is jealous of the Main!Andy also says a lot about how he's been living in this world. But I do wonder if you're gonna show the interaction between the Danny and Andy of this world. I was a bit tense when Sam saw Andy so he might not want to risk it with this world's Danny but if he's in a disguise then I guess it's safe. Good thing they figured out that loophole.
12/21/2020 c101 9Luna Lillyth
I completely overlooked the lack of "Chad". Now I'm concerned. (_;)
Seriously, I'm tense over what's going to be happening by the time the game is done. Before or afterward.
12/21/2020 c1 1rebeccanoto100
Hahaa. Those author notes are cute, I loved them!
12/7/2020 c100 Mana16
Princess Andrea LOL!
Ooh, use those green army men toys, like the ones in Toy Story, great for infiltration and spying, plus its cute/funny.
Nice touch giving the Gems sentience, wish they did that in canon.
Cool concept, if Sam and Tucker became half ghosts with Danny. Make a cool superhero team. For Sam anyway, I can totally see her embracing it. Although, unless Sam has strong will, not exactly sure how she would've resisted Freakshow's crystal ball. Tucker would've most likely done the same things in 'What you want' but without the jealousy of Danny having ghost powers. How would things be different if all three of them have ghost powers?
Til next time.
12/3/2020 c100 9Luna Lillyth
Huh, gems having more to them than the power.
Makes me want to hear more about their lore.
12/1/2020 c100 31Dp-Marvel94
I'm happy Andy got a little time to rest. I really loved his dream with Danny. I bet that was the real Danny and not the product of Andy's imagination so the brothers actually got to comfort each other! I also really like Andy's conversation with the gen of life. There's some interesting lore there.
11/24/2020 c99 Guest 4
Hi, I have some ideas for this book and the next book of child of mew. In the next book of the child of mew, Ash and Jayden should go on a vacation on Alola and meet Leo and luna (or their kids) and they start warming up to each other (if you get my meaning). and in this book once this is over with Freakshow, and the memory wipe, Andy becomes more popular along with Danny in school.
11/23/2020 c99 Mana16
Boy I hope they catch Freakshow. I'm rather surprised that Freakshow didn't make a world where its like a circus like in the show. Though I'm curious about this world having anthro people.
The Owlhouse show is totally worth watching, it relatively recently came on Disney plus on Oct 30.
I really love the idea of magic, especially with Juliette teaching Andy Fire magic.
Andy-Fire
Danny-Ice
Tucker-Lightning (since technology usually relies on electricity)
Sam-Earth via plants
Its how I feel on what they would be good at. Though I don't really see Tucker doing magic lol.
Til next time.
11/18/2020 c98 ArashiNokitsune
Paradigm Shift the entire situation there the fact that Andy meets an evil version of himself well the fact that he doesn't know that his brother is also watching this entire scenario well that something to fear for later
11/12/2020 c99 3Raidentensho
nice one. though, will Andy use the jewel like the Stranger's power from "Nomad of Nowhere" you know, clap and anything around the area that is inanimate is alive. hope it will help. looking forward to more. this will be epic. until then, later!
11/11/2020 c99 7RedHood001
I love the way the Corrupted Twins focused more on Andy. Echo noticed Juliette in the end but by then it was too late.

I don't know if this was what you were going for but the way the Twins admitted defeat really gives me some vibes. Like, both of them were amused but Danny seemed so accepting of it while Echo was so chill and applauded them. I know they're the type of 'villains' who honor their deals (like Chase Young in Xiaolin Showdown) and that honestly makes them so much better.

And the way Echo gave that message was sort of ominous but I strangely get the sort of vibe that he's also messing with Andy's head. Come to think of it, Danny accepted that defeat like he was having fun playing with friends and Echo acted so playful and told them how they may be able to play together again.

You probably can't tell but I'm fanboying over these two. XD

They're just... Such well-written antagonists here.

And now for the next world. Oooooooh, I love how Rose actually told the Andy of her world on the original Andy and Juliette's situation. What's interesting here is that this Andy, it seems, came back from the void but not like original Andy? Hm, so does that mean this is the world where Andy technically doesn't exist in the eyes of the main group (The Fentons, Sam, Tucker, etc)?

Honestly, I'm as curious as Andy right now.

This is so exciting! I look forward to the next update! I hope you're doing well and I wish you a safe, peaceful, and wonderful day!
11/11/2020 c99 9Luna Lillyth
Okay... I really can’t imagine how this au is supposed to work.
But I’m going to guess that the Andy of this world was never rescued from the Void.
11/10/2020 c1 31Dp-Marvel94
I'm pleasantly surprised that Corrupted Danny and Andy actually did follow the rules. And the third world! I wasn't sure what I was expecting but I still found myself surprised by the world you described. It makes me want to capture up on the Infinite Realms.
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