9/22/2015 c9 1Mabthorn
I love, love, love that you've given Chot such a good story, and a family. This is a great tale, and was interesting to read. I hadn't cared much about the Forevergreen storyline and thought that Chot was silly, but I like how you've made him someone that matters. To think of Door recognizing him! It gives Door depth. Hope you keep on writing ElfQuest fan fiction!
I love, love, love that you've given Chot such a good story, and a family. This is a great tale, and was interesting to read. I hadn't cared much about the Forevergreen storyline and thought that Chot was silly, but I like how you've made him someone that matters. To think of Door recognizing him! It gives Door depth. Hope you keep on writing ElfQuest fan fiction!
6/16/2015 c9 5rainbow-leaves
This was a great story. I loved seeing all of this from Dart's eyes. Very nice. I'm on to read the sequel!
This was a great story. I loved seeing all of this from Dart's eyes. Very nice. I'm on to read the sequel!
6/11/2015 c9 23Was-Mokie
I like that this story was told from Dart's perspective. Do. The. Prequel. Please!
I like that this story was told from Dart's perspective. Do. The. Prequel. Please!
6/11/2015 c8 Amberzlove
I love the whole idea that no words were needed for Chot's family to come and settle down with him. True family doesn't need a bunch of talking, but simply being there. Love this.
I love the whole idea that no words were needed for Chot's family to come and settle down with him. True family doesn't need a bunch of talking, but simply being there. Love this.
6/10/2015 c9 ice
I so want to see your prequel. Loved this story.
I so want to see your prequel. Loved this story.
6/8/2015 c8 5rainbow-leaves
Zey did what? Poor Chot. I've never seen him as a crier, but being torn apart inside can lead to heavy emotional upheaval. Good job!
Zey did what? Poor Chot. I've never seen him as a crier, but being torn apart inside can lead to heavy emotional upheaval. Good job!