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for Unity: An Epilogue

4/21/2018 c1 manuelmusical14
It's good to see the two gangs finding resolve from their losses. But one deliemna is understand the concept of one night stands but how can Maria be pregnant carrying the child of a man she only knew for 24 hours? Bravo anyway
10/14/2015 c1 1leiatas
Reading this seemed like a real part of the actual play. It was so well written. There wasn't too much detail, but there was just enough to imagine the lives of these people. I love how you wrote a one sentence paragraph for all of the other friends and gang members instead of describing them all in one or two paragraphs. It really adds a dramatic effect to the reading. The dialogue was well written as well. You even went as far to write Maria's interaction with her parents in Spanish. The funeral scene is so vivid, I felt like I was watching it. The end of your story is a real plot twist. I wouldn't have expected both Anita and Maria to be pregnant with children. I like this ending because it's very bittersweet. It's very sad because Anita and Maria both lost the loves of their lives. What makes it happier is that with death came life. It also brought the community together to help the young mothers raise their children. I really enjoyed reading this sequel to West Side Story!
7/25/2014 c1 1araika-sevra
This was great! loved it!

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