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12/22/2020 c16 3birdloverKim
I absolutely loved it! Characters were spot on and my boyfriend kept on asking what it was I was reading because I kept on lauging. Looking forward to the sequel!
10/24/2018 c16 Nagisa17
Please continue! This is really good!
7/21/2018 c16 marcy
ah no... you must continue this ...
7/20/2018 c14 Guest
That "Hello boys"... It kinda sounds like Crowley from Supernatural
6/3/2018 c1 CreammieeSenpai
sequel
4/23/2018 c16 Guest
Felt like you really captured the essence of both characters well! One of the best fmp fan fics I’ve ever read.
The only thing I have to say other than praise is more of a suggestion than a critic: during lemon scenes I think we’d like to hear more from Sousuke’s perspective. He is an extremely sexually repressed person, who is incapable of understanding how to express his sexual attraction towards Chidori. You built the tension really well the first few chapters, but him experiencing his first time having sex seemed to be irrelevant compared to Chidori, when it could have been a great opportunity for character development.
Sorry I ended up rambling XD it’s really great, keep it up!
3/15/2018 c13 Sousuke drinking
Its improbable he would drink for 2 motives:
the bad experience with alcohol in China, he lost the interest
searching for Chidori he was badly shot, lots of surgeries and stuff done to his organs. He cant drink alcohol anymore because of that. Would put his health in danger.

Also... I dont believe that at this point it would be hard for Chidori to say she loves Sousuke. They said it many times before in the novel.
Anyway, other than that, your story is alright. Entertaining.
2/4/2018 c16 20rocio-asakura
I love your history. It was easy to imaging the scenes. Really well done. Please make the second part!
11/29/2017 c16 11ACSkywalker
Fantastic story so far. Even if it is laced with grammatical and spelling errors. Thought the quality of the story you’re telling comibined with the love you put into this story makes it well worth reading.
9/24/2017 c16 BlueLion
you're progressing rather fast, perhaps too fast. You also may try to put more effort into spelling/grammar - I recommend a betareader.
9/24/2017 c16 DragonWarrior318
Thanks for the updates. I can't wait to read what will happen next for them.
9/24/2017 c16 Achilles1990
Was about time for an update. Cheers mate ! :)
4/20/2017 c6 toy2jzgte
just a nitpick but blocks don't have a manual saftey
12/27/2016 c1 Max Payne
Just a general remark: I liked the story very much, not all of the details, but it's good enough that I wanted it continue.

Best
MP
9/13/2016 c14 Mike Mueller
Please please please continue this story i honestly love it please continue it i must know what happens in their lives.
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