4/12/2014 c1 7eZombieassassin
As of this moment, my story with the most views doesn't have this many words! Over 5,000?! Wow, this is definitely short... Not!
As of this moment, my story with the most views doesn't have this many words! Over 5,000?! Wow, this is definitely short... Not!
3/14/2014 c2 3Della-Avril
I really like what you have so far! The plot is very interesting, and I want to see how it plays out. Is Alucard alive in this version? How will he react to seeing Seras.
I did however pick up on some grammatical errors that, had been corrected, would have made it all the better. Watch for improper verb tenses and misused comma placement. I look forward to your next chapter.
I really like what you have so far! The plot is very interesting, and I want to see how it plays out. Is Alucard alive in this version? How will he react to seeing Seras.
I did however pick up on some grammatical errors that, had been corrected, would have made it all the better. Watch for improper verb tenses and misused comma placement. I look forward to your next chapter.
3/14/2014 c2 Barbque
I think Seras will fight. Just seems like the person she is imo. The story has lots of potential, but you should make it a little less confusing trying to figure out who's talking. I would use the character's names a little more. Overall a good chapter by a good author
I think Seras will fight. Just seems like the person she is imo. The story has lots of potential, but you should make it a little less confusing trying to figure out who's talking. I would use the character's names a little more. Overall a good chapter by a good author