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4/12/2014 c1 7eZombieassassin
As of this moment, my story with the most views doesn't have this many words! Over 5,000?! Wow, this is definitely short... Not!
3/14/2014 c2 3Della-Avril
I really like what you have so far! The plot is very interesting, and I want to see how it plays out. Is Alucard alive in this version? How will he react to seeing Seras.

I did however pick up on some grammatical errors that, had been corrected, would have made it all the better. Watch for improper verb tenses and misused comma placement. I look forward to your next chapter.
3/14/2014 c2 Barbque
I think Seras will fight. Just seems like the person she is imo. The story has lots of potential, but you should make it a little less confusing trying to figure out who's talking. I would use the character's names a little more. Overall a good chapter by a good author

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