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for Tmnt the power of courage in a person

10/23/2016 c1 TMNTFanForever85
sad story
1/19/2014 c1 203BubblyShell22
Okay, you have a lot of mistakes in this story. When someone is speaking, there should be a separate paragraph for htat. Also, you have a lot of run-on sentences that need to be fixed as well as a lot of capitalization errors. But the biggest mistake is that you have this in the wrong section. If it's a TMNT story, you should have it in the Cartoons Ninja Turtles category. Same goes for your other TMNT stories. I like the premise of the story, but there's still a lot you need to work on to improve. This is just my two cents, and you did want me to comment on it and tell you what I thought.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

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