2/26/2014 c13 Emberwolf227
Please tell me you have 1 more chapter at least. If not could you maybe do an epilogue. If this is the end I have to tell you that this is THE BEST story I have ever read. Please please have 1 more chapter.
Please tell me you have 1 more chapter at least. If not could you maybe do an epilogue. If this is the end I have to tell you that this is THE BEST story I have ever read. Please please have 1 more chapter.
2/26/2014 c12 Emberwolf227
She finally killed Blood. Good! Too bad she got shot too! Great story. Another review on the way!
She finally killed Blood. Good! Too bad she got shot too! Great story. Another review on the way!
2/26/2014 c11 Emberwolf227
Sorry I haven't reviewed I've had several tests in college. I really enjoyed this ch I couldn't stop reading. More reviews coming!
Sorry I haven't reviewed I've had several tests in college. I really enjoyed this ch I couldn't stop reading. More reviews coming!
2/14/2014 c10 Emberwolf227
Happy sigh... I love this story so much. What I wouldn't do to meet Jack or Bobby in real life! ;)
Happy sigh... I love this story so much. What I wouldn't do to meet Jack or Bobby in real life! ;)
2/5/2014 c5 Emberwolf227
I know I have been reviewing a lot sorry if its annoying. I am really liking the story, at first I was a bit skeptic to if I would like it or not but its getting do hard not to read. I wonder what would happen if Bobby found out. If he did I would like him to try to help. Of course he could go into protective mode and take all of her weapons away and her disguise. Anyway keep writing and updating I am loving the story.
I know I have been reviewing a lot sorry if its annoying. I am really liking the story, at first I was a bit skeptic to if I would like it or not but its getting do hard not to read. I wonder what would happen if Bobby found out. If he did I would like him to try to help. Of course he could go into protective mode and take all of her weapons away and her disguise. Anyway keep writing and updating I am loving the story.
2/4/2014 c4 Emberwolf227
Aww so sweet. I'm loving this story more and more. :') Keep writing So sweet. Bravo! Bravo!
Aww so sweet. I'm loving this story more and more. :') Keep writing So sweet. Bravo! Bravo!
2/2/2014 c1 Emberwolf227
Your writing is very descriptive and you didn't make the story drag on. I am quite exited to read the next chapter. I am thinking of a few reactions Jack could have to Aya's so called stops. I like how you gave us a little bit of a cliffhanger but then again it's not. Bravo great job update soon!
Your writing is very descriptive and you didn't make the story drag on. I am quite exited to read the next chapter. I am thinking of a few reactions Jack could have to Aya's so called stops. I like how you gave us a little bit of a cliffhanger but then again it's not. Bravo great job update soon!
2/2/2014 c1 Ember227
Very interesting story so far. I really enjoyed how Aya has a cold hearted attitude that makes you truly feel what she felt when her mother died. I really think you should have her become close to Jack. Can't wait for the update.
Very interesting story so far. I really enjoyed how Aya has a cold hearted attitude that makes you truly feel what she felt when her mother died. I really think you should have her become close to Jack. Can't wait for the update.
2/3/2014 c3 Emberwolf227
I love how quick you are updating. I'm really interested in Abby. I can see the two becoming close friends as time progresses. Keep writing and updating because the more I read the better the story gets.
I love how quick you are updating. I'm really interested in Abby. I can see the two becoming close friends as time progresses. Keep writing and updating because the more I read the better the story gets.
2/3/2014 c2 Emberwolf227
Thanks for updating so soon. I'm getting more interested in Aya's past. I know her mother died but I can't wait to find out who killed her. I really think Jack and Aya are ganna become the closest first. I think that would be really cool to see the two bond. Keep writing this is a very interesting story.
Thanks for updating so soon. I'm getting more interested in Aya's past. I know her mother died but I can't wait to find out who killed her. I really think Jack and Aya are ganna become the closest first. I think that would be really cool to see the two bond. Keep writing this is a very interesting story.