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2/26/2014 c13 Emberwolf227
Please tell me you have 1 more chapter at least. If not could you maybe do an epilogue. If this is the end I have to tell you that this is THE BEST story I have ever read. Please please have 1 more chapter.
2/26/2014 c12 Emberwolf227
She finally killed Blood. Good! Too bad she got shot too! Great story. Another review on the way!
2/26/2014 c11 Emberwolf227
Sorry I haven't reviewed I've had several tests in college. I really enjoyed this ch I couldn't stop reading. More reviews coming!
2/14/2014 c10 Emberwolf227
Happy sigh... I love this story so much. What I wouldn't do to meet Jack or Bobby in real life! ;)
2/12/2014 c9 Emberwolf227
I am loving this story so much!
2/11/2014 c8 Emberwolf227
Aww this chapter was sweet. Keep writing pretty pwease! :)
2/9/2014 c7 Emberwolf227
Ch 7 is the same as ch 6?
2/9/2014 c6 Emberwolf227
Keep the updates coming! :)
2/5/2014 c5 Emberwolf227
I know I have been reviewing a lot sorry if its annoying. I am really liking the story, at first I was a bit skeptic to if I would like it or not but its getting do hard not to read. I wonder what would happen if Bobby found out. If he did I would like him to try to help. Of course he could go into protective mode and take all of her weapons away and her disguise. Anyway keep writing and updating I am loving the story.
2/4/2014 c4 Emberwolf227
Aww so sweet. I'm loving this story more and more. :') Keep writing So sweet. Bravo! Bravo!
2/2/2014 c1 Emberwolf227
Your writing is very descriptive and you didn't make the story drag on. I am quite exited to read the next chapter. I am thinking of a few reactions Jack could have to Aya's so called stops. I like how you gave us a little bit of a cliffhanger but then again it's not. Bravo great job update soon!
2/2/2014 c1 Ember227
Very interesting story so far. I really enjoyed how Aya has a cold hearted attitude that makes you truly feel what she felt when her mother died. I really think you should have her become close to Jack. Can't wait for the update.
2/3/2014 c3 Emberwolf227
I love how quick you are updating. I'm really interested in Abby. I can see the two becoming close friends as time progresses. Keep writing and updating because the more I read the better the story gets.
2/3/2014 c2 Emberwolf227
Thanks for updating so soon. I'm getting more interested in Aya's past. I know her mother died but I can't wait to find out who killed her. I really think Jack and Aya are ganna become the closest first. I think that would be really cool to see the two bond. Keep writing this is a very interesting story.

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