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8/28 c5 Lulu
I love this fanfic and would love you to make more chapters but it would be cool to see more dark jade ideas you have
8/28 c5 Ganzademon
Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon
8/26 c5 1Artlieis
ok that sounds exciting
8/21 c5 4Saisaici - The Helper
Sound interesting. I always like reading Dark Jade storys.
8/21 c5 lionheat09
sound interesting we need more dark jade story
9/23/2019 c3 1Artlieis
awesome chapter
8/29/2019 c4 14dark nightmere
I think that Jade should become more evil as Ratso's plan almost compromises the entire operation of Jade being Shendu's apprentice as section 13 move in to arrest him as Jade quickly summons forth several of her female ninja's to hold off section 13 while they get back to base where Shendu will scold them for disobeying his orders as he knows that Jade will be even more determined to enhance her ninja's and to bring down her uncles and section 13 which has began hunting her as she use's her powers to summon forth her ninja's aiming to enhance her fighting skills and make her uncle Jackie pay for trying to seal away her Chi. I think that Shendu meanwhile will begin plotting how to exploit Jade's power to bring back his brethren from the other dimension which they are trapped in while her summoning of her own shadowkhan is impressive he knows that using the shadow's she maybe able to breach other worlds and barrios meant to keep out other demons and creatures of evil while Hak Foo's infiltration of section 13 is a success he will give Shendu the bracelet which contains the essence of the talismans while he may not have the real talismans yet he knows that holding the essence of them is useful to his plans and he can hopefully create new ones through it as his devious mind aims to fully corrupt Jade with the new Talismans. I think that Jackie should begin a desperate hunt for Jade after learning from captain black that Jade and Ratso where spotted in town and that one of his agent teams engaged the shadowkhan which he suspects was sent by Shendu to hold off his agents while Jade escaped but it proves that Jade maybe working with the dark hand and Shendu which is really bad as black returns to base aiming to uncover any new leads on locating the dark hands base or hideout but he will have to face off with the shadowkhan which Hak foo left behind to ambush him when he copied the talismans as he realises that Shendu is one step ahead of them. I think that Uncle meanwhile should begin to delve into his spells fearing that Jade has become corrupted by the dark chi within her which is really bad as this could cause more problems as he learns from Jackie that Shendu assisted Jade's escape only for uncle to rebec this stating that Jade herself may have summoned the shadowkhan using the dark chi within herself to command them to attack section 13 as she and Ratso escaped he fears that Jade may have become Shendu's apprentice which means that the dragon is teaching her all manner of dark spells and other evil abilities to use against them as Uncle knows that he and Tohru begin to research ways to remove the demon chi and her own natural dark chi from Jade.
1/5/2019 c4 Guest
Когда выйдет новая глава
7/5/2018 c4 Dracowoman
good job, update soon please.
4/26/2018 c4 1TheWhisperingWarrior
Glad you're back, and I've read all the new chapters.
4/24/2018 c1 40Eduard Kassel
Hmm, interesting.

A bit bare on details of the setting.

You hit the ground running. Good way to get action rolling; but Jade seems too eager here Jackie's perceived betrayal does not giver her any reason to trust Shendu. She and Shendu have many reasons to hate each other.

A few capitalization errors too.

So an intriguing concept but i worry you are rushing things along.
4/24/2018 c4 Guest
A new tribe, interesting, I can not wait to see the faces that Chan will see when they see the new Jade, what's next, new talismans?
4/23/2018 c4 10ultima-owner
that will let him steal them later, right?
4/23/2018 c4 Aramisxx1
This is the perfect length of a chapter not too long but not too short, and this is getting better and better hopefully we get to seee more sometime in the future
4/23/2018 c4 24Midnight Lost
Today must be an early christmas to get so many updates in a row.
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