1/27/2017 c2 Guest
NOOOOOOOOOOO NELLY PLZ DON'T BE VAMPIRE I LOVED YOU AS A HUMAN!
NOOOOOOOOOOO NELLY PLZ DON'T BE VAMPIRE I LOVED YOU AS A HUMAN!
2/3/2016 c1 15Wake Me Up When It's All Over
About Marcus... that's funny, I'm the 'psycho-killer' in my school. Well not really, but if people wanna talk stupid about me, I'm gonna creep them out as payback.
Aaaanyway, first of all I love that Nelly's alive (YAY!). Second of all, I love your title. (Matches with all the books. Nice.) And lastly, I love the way you're developing the plot.
About Marcus... that's funny, I'm the 'psycho-killer' in my school. Well not really, but if people wanna talk stupid about me, I'm gonna creep them out as payback.
Aaaanyway, first of all I love that Nelly's alive (YAY!). Second of all, I love your title. (Matches with all the books. Nice.) And lastly, I love the way you're developing the plot.
5/31/2015 c2 Guest
Off to a great start. Just do some editing to minimize confusion and enhance the way it comes off, and you're all set.
Off to a great start. Just do some editing to minimize confusion and enhance the way it comes off, and you're all set.
5/14/2015 c1 Emochick8000
Yo finish this please I love the whole mystery and suspense thing but i need to know what happens!
Yo finish this please I love the whole mystery and suspense thing but i need to know what happens!
11/30/2014 c1 Carrie
that was awesome you should cont. it
that was awesome you should cont. it
5/21/2014 c1 Abyssevoke025
This is really good but i have a problem with Nelly being alive... in order for her to be alive, Otis and Vlad would've had to dig her up outta the grave without being caught, be incredibly quick about, and fill the hole back up all the while with Nelly's almost dead body laying there. I'm not trying to be rude but it's just an observation.
This is really good but i have a problem with Nelly being alive... in order for her to be alive, Otis and Vlad would've had to dig her up outta the grave without being caught, be incredibly quick about, and fill the hole back up all the while with Nelly's almost dead body laying there. I'm not trying to be rude but it's just an observation.