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7/29/2020 c1 7ZombieChick2000
please please please update. I want to know what happens!
11/13/2019 c3 1phoenixfire567
I know you probibly aren't going to but please update this its a really good story.
11/11/2014 c3 Brianna
I really like this story! :) You're a really good writer, and I like what you're doing with the characters. I really want to see how Kook being a cheerleader turns out!

I think the plot and the backstory are pretty well developed, and I think that this story is working out well.

Side note: Like BlueJay026, I also have a bit of an issue with the idea of Crocness and Skabb sleeping together due to religious beliefs. But that's just me.

This is a fantastic story and I'd love to see you update more.

Have a nice day,
Brianna
10/28/2014 c3 Rhyley
Yo, you got to update, dude I love all of it ;* keep it up Bro
8/22/2014 c3 15BlueJay026
Kook as a cheerleader? That's hilarious! I can't wait to see what you do with that!
I really like how you have multiple sub-plots put together; each Defender has their own story. Since all the Defenders get a chance to be in the spotlight, the story offers a wide range of variety. I'm interested to see how you continue to weave everything together.
Update soon! This is a cool story! God bless you!
8/19/2014 c2 eyyyyyyyyyyy
please please write more, I need more of this.
8/20/2014 c3 1Citrine x
Yay! Really glad you updated this cuz I really enjoy it! Its good that you spend roughly equal ammounts of time on all the characters. Don't feel bad for making any of them a little different to their 'steryotypes' stuff happens so it makes your characters more realistic! Ballista's gonna be mean to Croc, it's natural!
Anyways really good job! Keep writing!
8/20/2014 c3 Zeltic
i love it!I like how their personalities conceded in the history.
The plot is so interesting!
PD:Sorry if a write bad some word,but i am bad in english
8/19/2014 c3 10lsgirl988
I love this story!
8/19/2014 c3 26akl110998233
Yay. I was hoping you were going to update this soon. I really like this story and its love triangles. I hope you update soon. Keep writing
7/2/2014 c1 Zeltic
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6/18/2014 c2 1Citrine x
Hiya! This is a really cool twist on the characters and I think it works well! You're a great writer and have a good style and vocabulary (better than mine, but then again most people have a better vocabularry than me :/) Not sure weather I should like Featal at this point cuz I love Kook and Shaiden! I'm looking forwards to your next update!

Just a note, Shaiden (and all the blue defenders) are british meaning that they would also say 'Mum' other than that and a few little typos which can be fixed with a few prooreads, there is nothing wrong with this! :D
Keep writing!
6/12/2014 c2 15BlueJay026
This story's pretty cool! I like how you've inserted the Defenders into the high school world. I also like how you're writing a little about each Defender, and how you're telling the story from different sides. You're especially doing an awesome job with Kook's character, and I really liked the part that explained he only tells bird-related jokes.
I have to be honest, though, I didn't like the comment about Skabb and Crocness sleeping together. I'm not trying to be mean or anything; it's just that specific thing goes against my beliefs.
Still, don't let that discourage you from writing this story. I like it; the plot line is clever, and your dialogue is pretty good! You're doing a great job, so keep on writing! God bless you!
5/18/2014 c2 14Were Shadic future predictor
good chapters love em keep writing loved the ending :)

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