11/13/2019 c3 1phoenixfire567
I know you probibly aren't going to but please update this its a really good story.
I know you probibly aren't going to but please update this its a really good story.
11/11/2014 c3 Brianna
I really like this story! :) You're a really good writer, and I like what you're doing with the characters. I really want to see how Kook being a cheerleader turns out!
I think the plot and the backstory are pretty well developed, and I think that this story is working out well.
Side note: Like BlueJay026, I also have a bit of an issue with the idea of Crocness and Skabb sleeping together due to religious beliefs. But that's just me.
This is a fantastic story and I'd love to see you update more.
Have a nice day,
Brianna
I really like this story! :) You're a really good writer, and I like what you're doing with the characters. I really want to see how Kook being a cheerleader turns out!
I think the plot and the backstory are pretty well developed, and I think that this story is working out well.
Side note: Like BlueJay026, I also have a bit of an issue with the idea of Crocness and Skabb sleeping together due to religious beliefs. But that's just me.
This is a fantastic story and I'd love to see you update more.
Have a nice day,
Brianna
10/28/2014 c3 Rhyley
Yo, you got to update, dude I love all of it ;* keep it up Bro
Yo, you got to update, dude I love all of it ;* keep it up Bro
8/22/2014 c3 15BlueJay026
Kook as a cheerleader? That's hilarious! I can't wait to see what you do with that!
I really like how you have multiple sub-plots put together; each Defender has their own story. Since all the Defenders get a chance to be in the spotlight, the story offers a wide range of variety. I'm interested to see how you continue to weave everything together.
Update soon! This is a cool story! God bless you!
Kook as a cheerleader? That's hilarious! I can't wait to see what you do with that!
I really like how you have multiple sub-plots put together; each Defender has their own story. Since all the Defenders get a chance to be in the spotlight, the story offers a wide range of variety. I'm interested to see how you continue to weave everything together.
Update soon! This is a cool story! God bless you!
8/19/2014 c2 eyyyyyyyyyyy
please please write more, I need more of this.
please please write more, I need more of this.
8/20/2014 c3 1Citrine x
Yay! Really glad you updated this cuz I really enjoy it! Its good that you spend roughly equal ammounts of time on all the characters. Don't feel bad for making any of them a little different to their 'steryotypes' stuff happens so it makes your characters more realistic! Ballista's gonna be mean to Croc, it's natural!
Anyways really good job! Keep writing!
Yay! Really glad you updated this cuz I really enjoy it! Its good that you spend roughly equal ammounts of time on all the characters. Don't feel bad for making any of them a little different to their 'steryotypes' stuff happens so it makes your characters more realistic! Ballista's gonna be mean to Croc, it's natural!
Anyways really good job! Keep writing!
8/20/2014 c3 Zeltic
i love it!I like how their personalities conceded in the history.
The plot is so interesting!
PD:Sorry if a write bad some word,but i am bad in english
i love it!I like how their personalities conceded in the history.
The plot is so interesting!
PD:Sorry if a write bad some word,but i am bad in english
8/19/2014 c3 26akl110998233
Yay. I was hoping you were going to update this soon. I really like this story and its love triangles. I hope you update soon. Keep writing
Yay. I was hoping you were going to update this soon. I really like this story and its love triangles. I hope you update soon. Keep writing
6/18/2014 c2 1Citrine x
Hiya! This is a really cool twist on the characters and I think it works well! You're a great writer and have a good style and vocabulary (better than mine, but then again most people have a better vocabularry than me :/) Not sure weather I should like Featal at this point cuz I love Kook and Shaiden! I'm looking forwards to your next update!
Just a note, Shaiden (and all the blue defenders) are british meaning that they would also say 'Mum' other than that and a few little typos which can be fixed with a few prooreads, there is nothing wrong with this! :D
Keep writing!
Hiya! This is a really cool twist on the characters and I think it works well! You're a great writer and have a good style and vocabulary (better than mine, but then again most people have a better vocabularry than me :/) Not sure weather I should like Featal at this point cuz I love Kook and Shaiden! I'm looking forwards to your next update!
Just a note, Shaiden (and all the blue defenders) are british meaning that they would also say 'Mum' other than that and a few little typos which can be fixed with a few prooreads, there is nothing wrong with this! :D
Keep writing!
6/12/2014 c2 15BlueJay026
This story's pretty cool! I like how you've inserted the Defenders into the high school world. I also like how you're writing a little about each Defender, and how you're telling the story from different sides. You're especially doing an awesome job with Kook's character, and I really liked the part that explained he only tells bird-related jokes.
I have to be honest, though, I didn't like the comment about Skabb and Crocness sleeping together. I'm not trying to be mean or anything; it's just that specific thing goes against my beliefs.
Still, don't let that discourage you from writing this story. I like it; the plot line is clever, and your dialogue is pretty good! You're doing a great job, so keep on writing! God bless you!
This story's pretty cool! I like how you've inserted the Defenders into the high school world. I also like how you're writing a little about each Defender, and how you're telling the story from different sides. You're especially doing an awesome job with Kook's character, and I really liked the part that explained he only tells bird-related jokes.
I have to be honest, though, I didn't like the comment about Skabb and Crocness sleeping together. I'm not trying to be mean or anything; it's just that specific thing goes against my beliefs.
Still, don't let that discourage you from writing this story. I like it; the plot line is clever, and your dialogue is pretty good! You're doing a great job, so keep on writing! God bless you!