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1/6 c8 AsashiOfSapphire
What in the blue hell is WRONG with that group?
1/5 c8 15triviatrap1982
Yeah...reality is starting to settle in with the girls. In fact I like that you took that route, and gave the choices to the characters. Either they take the L, or they mess things up giving Keitaro a reason. I do wonder however, who's going to be the first to realize that Naru's blowing smoke and decides that they're going to want to prove themselves.
1/4 c8 7SilentSinger948
It's really sad that the girls continue to ignore the reality that's in front of them. The only option they have is to sign the new leases. Whatever plan they might try will surely fail. Whatever their planning may cause Keitaro to see that there's no hope in them changing and kick them out of his life for good.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
1/4 c8 8Grey Wolf4
I thought of Naru as being one of the most immature and pathetic characters I ever saw in my life, because the bottom line is she never handles anything like a sane and mature person. I mean look at all the stupid conclusions she jumps to and the most annoying part is she never listens to anyone who tries to tell her the truth.

So Suzu was getting on Naru's nerves, eh? Well that was tough because throughout her stay at Suzu's I got the impression that Naru was being a giant pain in the ass and Suzu had been VERY patient with Naru. Also Tatsu (I assume that's Suzu's boyfriend) I doubt Suzu is the sort who would date a jerk and I doubt he was being a creep, it's probably another of Naru's stupid conclusions!

No matter what I think of Keitaro and Naru's relationship the bottom line is they are not suited for one another at all. I really hope that Keitaro and Naru do not get back together whatsoever I always preferred Shinobu (albeit old enough) with Keitaro because she is not going to be 13, 14 or 15 or whatever forever. Also there are couples with greater age differances that have worked out great!

Also I can see most of the girls refuse to see reality or even where Keitaro might be coming from which I find very shameful. Also Haruka is not being very caring towards her own nephew on the matter because of her ignoring the girls abuse, as does it seems Seta.

Anyway good update.
1/4 c8 Under Of Flower
i hope the plan fail
1/4 c8 alcofanrs11
Naru's view side is big load of bullshit! She is abuser herself and is denying it herself!
1/4 c8 2Tig3rzhark
I really like the direction this story is going in. I really hope that those girls stop treating Keitaro like a punching bag. If going back to normal means that Keitaro gets treated like a dog again, then they deserve to be away from the Hinata-sou. Keep going and I hope he comes out in one piece.
1/4 c8 226Kamen Rider Chrome
They need to compromise or lose everything.
1/4 c8 3Samhan
He must call the tenants' families to take them home.
12/26/2020 c7 Guest
Oh boy... I guess Keitaro nearly died by Naru's punches? Plus did he just slap Mutsumi? Okay, more shit's gonna happen in the next chapter.
12/25/2020 c7 8Grey Wolf4
This is a great update, I never liked Naru she was often very childish, immature and selfish. In fact one instance where Naru's selfishness is emphasized is where she refused to let Keitaro and Kanako work things out...work things out like ADULTS!

In fact when has Naru ever handled anything like a mature person? But mind you, I think you have a point about the element of mistrust in Keitaro and Naru's so called 'relationship' and how Keitaro never addressed that issue, not that I'm sure he could because Naru would throw a tantrum.

Quite bluntly I think of Naru as just a selfish, pathetic, overgrown spoiled child.

About Hina I think her attitude is lacking in any genuine CARE for her family, even her grandchildren. Because of how she treated Kanako and telling her to keep quiet and I hated it when Keitaro blindly joined in. If Hina had cared she would have done something about the abuse and not blindly side with the girls.

In fact Hina seems to care more about the girls then her own family and I don't think of her as shrewd or caring at all, because look at how the girls act and how spoiled and entitled most of them especially Naru.

I hoped things ended better for Keitaro because really his only crime was to put his foot down and stand up for himself, something he should have done in cannon and I hated him becoming a Seta clone even down to the driving skills and glasses. Because standing up for himself and being himself would have been REAL character development and I quote from Bruce Lee:

“Always be yourself, express yourself, have faith in yourself, do not go out and look for a successful personality and duplicate it.”
12/20/2020 c7 2Tig3rzhark
I still hope to see the end. Keep going. I hope that things work out for everyone.
12/19/2020 c7 15triviatrap1982
Honestly, I can appreciate how hard it is to write a Love Hina story, without it turning to a bash fic. Though, the die was cast, I think I have a pretty good idea that things will go off the rails fast if not kept in check. As a little bit of a suggestion, if you do not want itto become a bash fic (trust me I learned from hard experience, and from being unhappy from earlier works) the hand of redemption does have to be offered...it's up to the others if they want it or not.
12/19/2020 c7 7SilentSinger948
This was a very tense chapter. The confrontation and eventually break up needed to happen. Their relationship just wasn't working. They both need to change.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
12/19/2020 c7 Under Of Flower
annnnd karma coming to them lol
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