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1/15 c48 6Kacey1111
Please update
7/28/2019 c1 karekalovegood
Good
1/17/2018 c25 Guest
These are good! Some are very literal but most of them sound very pretty. Don't listen to the negative reviews: a lot of poetry is so subjective and honestly does sound like nonsense or words put together if you aren't listening. I'm partial to the first poem ("Have you seen my shadow?") but the ones about the new baby are so hopeful!
5/24/2014 c1 nogames
random words jumbled together doesn't constitute a poem
5/24/2014 c1 Guest
Ooh really deep. Good job!
5/23/2014 c1 2Depthsofthemind
So what exsactly are her regrets; trusting Liam, being rude to her mom before she died, trying to run out on the fosters? This is a very pretty poem, but it doesn't seem to tie into anything that would have to do with Callie's life.
5/23/2014 c1 1bumblebeatrice
Yeah...This was the most pointless thing I've ever read.
Made no sense whatsoever.
And why would you comment on your own work.
If only you could see my face right now.
And it wasn't even a poem...
I still don't understand.
5/23/2014 c1 334No Fate 1990
Terrific

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