12/28/2018 c3 Ora
I really liked this! The writing is good and these are stories that aren’t really told much in fanfics. The ending of Ben’s story was good, I liked how you finished it because it felt unfinished to me too. Really enjoyed reading these!
I really liked this! The writing is good and these are stories that aren’t really told much in fanfics. The ending of Ben’s story was good, I liked how you finished it because it felt unfinished to me too. Really enjoyed reading these!
3/2/2017 c1 1BelladonasMom
All three short stories were really great. Kind of little vignettes. Very well done!
All three short stories were really great. Kind of little vignettes. Very well done!
12/4/2014 c3 19Philliwolf5
This chapter was awesome. Kind of reminded me of my service too, since I went through Vietnam-era training. Very nicely-done!
-Philli
This chapter was awesome. Kind of reminded me of my service too, since I went through Vietnam-era training. Very nicely-done!
-Philli
11/26/2014 c2 Philliwolf5
Loved it so much! You did a great job showing Ben's awkwardness with compliments and his interactions with others. I had wanted to know what had happened in the time between his change and Mercy's arrival. Very well done!
Loved it so much! You did a great job showing Ben's awkwardness with compliments and his interactions with others. I had wanted to know what had happened in the time between his change and Mercy's arrival. Very well done!
8/10/2014 c1 Megz17
I liked it, well done and thanks for sharing! :D
I liked it, well done and thanks for sharing! :D
5/20/2014 c1 Philliwolf5
That was a cute little oneshot. I like the banter between the two Alphas, and the initial annoyance Mat had with the Marrok's call. I think you got the mannerisms good, and that Bran seemed spot on. We don't delve heavily into Bran in the books as in my opinion, so I think that gives fanfic writers more leeway as far as portraying him. Thank God for that, lol. There were a few punctuation and grammatical mistakes, but they didnt' take away from the story at all. You do a great job of painting the relationshiop between characters. I could tell that Mat and Bran were old friends or at least associates, and Mat has a wonderfully candid relationship with his wife/mate. Beautifully done, and I hope to read more of your Alpha&Omega/Mercy Thompson stories!
-Philli
That was a cute little oneshot. I like the banter between the two Alphas, and the initial annoyance Mat had with the Marrok's call. I think you got the mannerisms good, and that Bran seemed spot on. We don't delve heavily into Bran in the books as in my opinion, so I think that gives fanfic writers more leeway as far as portraying him. Thank God for that, lol. There were a few punctuation and grammatical mistakes, but they didnt' take away from the story at all. You do a great job of painting the relationshiop between characters. I could tell that Mat and Bran were old friends or at least associates, and Mat has a wonderfully candid relationship with his wife/mate. Beautifully done, and I hope to read more of your Alpha&Omega/Mercy Thompson stories!
-Philli