4/18/2016 c1 7Lizardphobia
Oh gosh. This is beautiful and so very poetic. I loved what you did with the three different voices. With Peeta's, your words dragged up images of warmth and I can't explain it, but his scenes seemed to bathed in an almost golden light.
With Katniss, it turned logical and clinical, and I'm somehow reminded of the colour grey, and her grey eyes. (Again, I can't explain it, but if that's what you were going for, then you nailed it :))
I loved that no names were mentioned, you let their voices speak for themselves, and expressed who they were perfectly.
Oh gosh. This is beautiful and so very poetic. I loved what you did with the three different voices. With Peeta's, your words dragged up images of warmth and I can't explain it, but his scenes seemed to bathed in an almost golden light.
With Katniss, it turned logical and clinical, and I'm somehow reminded of the colour grey, and her grey eyes. (Again, I can't explain it, but if that's what you were going for, then you nailed it :))
I loved that no names were mentioned, you let their voices speak for themselves, and expressed who they were perfectly.
1/24/2016 c1 6BooksAreMedicine
Well done. I loved how Haymitch viewed the act and how he described them with the anomaly and ignition bits.
I really enjoyed the POV switches too
Well done. I loved how Haymitch viewed the act and how he described them with the anomaly and ignition bits.
I really enjoyed the POV switches too
12/29/2014 c1 2safayi
Creepy peeping Haymitch told the most interesting part of the story for me. Lol.
Creepy peeping Haymitch told the most interesting part of the story for me. Lol.
11/2/2014 c1 Chel
Your work is really well written. I'm at awe on how you did juctice to Haymitch. Kudos to you.
Your work is really well written. I'm at awe on how you did juctice to Haymitch. Kudos to you.
6/15/2014 c1 8Loverofallthingsmusic
Ohh wow! AMAZING job! I love all of the depth and emotion in this story! :)
Ohh wow! AMAZING job! I love all of the depth and emotion in this story! :)
6/13/2014 c1 zbethg
OMGNESS, I just found this and I find it sooo sweet. The way you wrote their lovemaking was beautiful, it didn't seem smutlike or anything like it. Wonderful writing, keep it up!
OMGNESS, I just found this and I find it sooo sweet. The way you wrote their lovemaking was beautiful, it didn't seem smutlike or anything like it. Wonderful writing, keep it up!
6/3/2014 c1 wondergirl329
Wonderful. So original with the labeling of the victors as you switch perspective. Perhaps my favorite though is Peeta's description of feeling completely wanted. It feels so true to his character and the bond they share. Just lovely.
Wonderful. So original with the labeling of the victors as you switch perspective. Perhaps my favorite though is Peeta's description of feeling completely wanted. It feels so true to his character and the bond they share. Just lovely.