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3/3 c16 9quirky cricket
Hello, person 4 reading this who took a break from fanfic and is back(?)! Thanks for updating!

- Arnold’s family forcing him into fancy cars when he just wants something practical is amazing
- almost as good as Wanda trying to be mysterious and DA ruining it
- aww, tense Tim and Phoebe
- why was their class that stupid? So sad
- I’m also pretty sure that while Arnold likes Phoebe uninjured, he also likes her injured. You know, based on their interactions so far...
- for real, your Arnold/Phoebe mushiness is so precious and I love it
- also that Ralphie & Phoebe built lightsabers. Because of course.

The antics are so great! I’m excited to read more!
3/3 c15 quirky cricket
- the guys in matching sleeveless shirts is amazing
- Keesha is, in fact, the Paris of people. She’s a great Gina
- Arnold and Phoebe should really consider Ralphie’s sensitive stomach when they get all mushy with each other. Jeez.
- “ Keesha batted her eyelashes and grinned. "Oh, honey, we do not have the time to unpack all of that."” Yes, let’s burn the whole suitcase instead.
- What if Ralphie is teasing DA about liking him because he does know? I mean, not that he would know because he’s Ralphie but... it’s just like him to accidentally stumble upon the truth
- oh DA, don’t give Phoebe an opening to whip out her PowerPoint of Arnold Perlstein, Best Guy Ever. She will take it
- any possible romance involving Ralphie has a discussion at the beginning of “oh please no not Ralphie”. It is known.
- DA is right that Phoebe should be glad she wasn’t obsessed with Ralphie... then she’d have to be a Lannister
- DA can and should be picky as hell

Another lovely chapter, friend!
3/1 c14 quirky cricket
1. AWWW TIM SWEETIE NOOOO
2. “fancy-ass waffles and shit” is the best breakfast
3. Ralphie and Mark’s treasure hunt is adorable and I loved it
4. “ No!" Tim and D.A. both said, louder than they intended.
“YES!” I yelled at the fictional characters.
5. “ God, what kind of primetime high school drama bullshit is this?” THE BEST KIND
6. Night at the Roxbury always plays when Carlos is around. It is known.
3/1 c13 quirky cricket
- Are we sure that D. A. wants companionship and not, you know, the sex?
- Of course Arnold’s nemesis will involve Phoebe in schemes.
- and of course Phoebe knows things will happen to her
- DOROTHY ANN CAN BE FUN AND COOL!
- basically I assume that DA is in a series of cold showers when not appearing in the scene
- Phoebe’s drunk effusiveness is hilarious
- awww Tim nooooo not feelings for Phoebe!
6/13/2020 c16 28Son of Whitebeard
wow what a thrilling race
5/19/2020 c16 10saturn95
Wow! Another great chapter! I didn't realize it had been so long since the last one, but when I saw the update notification, I was like 'Yes!'.

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that you did a great job once again :) I always find myself referring back to voice actors from the old show when I read the dialogue between the friends because of how well you portray each of the characters. I can't wait to see what other drama unfolds as time goes on. For some reason I have a feeling that something major is going to happen between D.A. and Janet over the vote count. Also, I can't shake the feeling that Tim might really try to get between Arnold and Phoebe, since there's already indication that he's trying to flirt with her. But we'll see what happens :)

Anyway, keep up the great work! I look forward to the next chapter :)
9/2/2019 c15 5TheChosenFangirl37
*chanting* Carlos and DA ! Carlos and DA !
9/2/2019 c13 TheChosenFangirl37
I really hope you continue the D.A. triangle cause I’d be happy to see that play out either way. Usually I’m 100% DA and Carlos but with your story I can see Ralphie. But if Tim even tries to mess with Phoebe and Arnold’s aka my OTP he will catch these hands!
9/2/2019 c11 TheChosenFangirl37
I LOVE IT SO MUCH ! Just a question, is this the same universe as the Phoebe/DA story and the bromance story?
9/2/2019 c4 TheChosenFangirl37
Wanda was always my least favorite in the show answer I love the way you’ve written her! She’s a total bitch and i hate her!
7/6/2019 c15 28Son of Whitebeard
quite the love triangle
6/15/2019 c1 Guest
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6/6/2019 c15 6NVSB32
Arnold and Phoebe's disagreement about spending money reminds me so much of my last relationship it's scary. :/

Poor Tim. You try so hard to hide it, but you just can't, especially at that age.

Of course Wanda's nicknames for the girls all involve the word bitch.

I don't remember the Paris of people line, but I definitely remember the human equivalent of the 100 emoji line. I'm still leaning more towards Wanda being Gina, and Keesha being Rosa, but reasonable people can disagree. ;)

Cool description of Phoebe's plant experience. I always wondered how all that shape shifting must have felt.

DA's dilemma just makes me think of the Crazy Ex-Girlfriend song "The Math of Love Triangles."
5/24/2019 c14 No Name
I hope Phoebe realizes how much better for her Tim is than Arnold. If she wasn't so obsessed with Arnold she'd see that. Besides Arnold belongs with Wanda.
4/10/2019 c14 CDA luvr
I was hoping for more of the DA liking Ralphie and Carlos thing, but I actually really enjoyed this chapter. It was interesting getting in Tim's head and seeing the triangle mainly from his POV but I also liked that we see Arnold's perspective too
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