3/3 c16 9quirky cricket
Hello, person 4 reading this who took a break from fanfic and is back(?)! Thanks for updating!
- Arnold’s family forcing him into fancy cars when he just wants something practical is amazing
- almost as good as Wanda trying to be mysterious and DA ruining it
- aww, tense Tim and Phoebe
- why was their class that stupid? So sad
- I’m also pretty sure that while Arnold likes Phoebe uninjured, he also likes her injured. You know, based on their interactions so far...
- for real, your Arnold/Phoebe mushiness is so precious and I love it
- also that Ralphie & Phoebe built lightsabers. Because of course.
The antics are so great! I’m excited to read more!
Hello, person 4 reading this who took a break from fanfic and is back(?)! Thanks for updating!
- Arnold’s family forcing him into fancy cars when he just wants something practical is amazing
- almost as good as Wanda trying to be mysterious and DA ruining it
- aww, tense Tim and Phoebe
- why was their class that stupid? So sad
- I’m also pretty sure that while Arnold likes Phoebe uninjured, he also likes her injured. You know, based on their interactions so far...
- for real, your Arnold/Phoebe mushiness is so precious and I love it
- also that Ralphie & Phoebe built lightsabers. Because of course.
The antics are so great! I’m excited to read more!
3/3 c15 quirky cricket
- the guys in matching sleeveless shirts is amazing
- Keesha is, in fact, the Paris of people. She’s a great Gina
- Arnold and Phoebe should really consider Ralphie’s sensitive stomach when they get all mushy with each other. Jeez.
- “ Keesha batted her eyelashes and grinned. "Oh, honey, we do not have the time to unpack all of that."” Yes, let’s burn the whole suitcase instead.
- What if Ralphie is teasing DA about liking him because he does know? I mean, not that he would know because he’s Ralphie but... it’s just like him to accidentally stumble upon the truth
- oh DA, don’t give Phoebe an opening to whip out her PowerPoint of Arnold Perlstein, Best Guy Ever. She will take it
- any possible romance involving Ralphie has a discussion at the beginning of “oh please no not Ralphie”. It is known.
- DA is right that Phoebe should be glad she wasn’t obsessed with Ralphie... then she’d have to be a Lannister
- DA can and should be picky as hell
Another lovely chapter, friend!
- the guys in matching sleeveless shirts is amazing
- Keesha is, in fact, the Paris of people. She’s a great Gina
- Arnold and Phoebe should really consider Ralphie’s sensitive stomach when they get all mushy with each other. Jeez.
- “ Keesha batted her eyelashes and grinned. "Oh, honey, we do not have the time to unpack all of that."” Yes, let’s burn the whole suitcase instead.
- What if Ralphie is teasing DA about liking him because he does know? I mean, not that he would know because he’s Ralphie but... it’s just like him to accidentally stumble upon the truth
- oh DA, don’t give Phoebe an opening to whip out her PowerPoint of Arnold Perlstein, Best Guy Ever. She will take it
- any possible romance involving Ralphie has a discussion at the beginning of “oh please no not Ralphie”. It is known.
- DA is right that Phoebe should be glad she wasn’t obsessed with Ralphie... then she’d have to be a Lannister
- DA can and should be picky as hell
Another lovely chapter, friend!
3/1 c14 quirky cricket
1. AWWW TIM SWEETIE NOOOO
2. “fancy-ass waffles and shit” is the best breakfast
3. Ralphie and Mark’s treasure hunt is adorable and I loved it
4. “ No!" Tim and D.A. both said, louder than they intended.
“YES!” I yelled at the fictional characters.
5. “ God, what kind of primetime high school drama bullshit is this?” THE BEST KIND
6. Night at the Roxbury always plays when Carlos is around. It is known.
1. AWWW TIM SWEETIE NOOOO
2. “fancy-ass waffles and shit” is the best breakfast
3. Ralphie and Mark’s treasure hunt is adorable and I loved it
4. “ No!" Tim and D.A. both said, louder than they intended.
“YES!” I yelled at the fictional characters.
5. “ God, what kind of primetime high school drama bullshit is this?” THE BEST KIND
6. Night at the Roxbury always plays when Carlos is around. It is known.
3/1 c13 quirky cricket
- Are we sure that D. A. wants companionship and not, you know, the sex?
- Of course Arnold’s nemesis will involve Phoebe in schemes.
- and of course Phoebe knows things will happen to her
- DOROTHY ANN CAN BE FUN AND COOL!
- basically I assume that DA is in a series of cold showers when not appearing in the scene
- Phoebe’s drunk effusiveness is hilarious
- awww Tim nooooo not feelings for Phoebe!
- Are we sure that D. A. wants companionship and not, you know, the sex?
- Of course Arnold’s nemesis will involve Phoebe in schemes.
- and of course Phoebe knows things will happen to her
- DOROTHY ANN CAN BE FUN AND COOL!
- basically I assume that DA is in a series of cold showers when not appearing in the scene
- Phoebe’s drunk effusiveness is hilarious
- awww Tim nooooo not feelings for Phoebe!
5/19/2020 c16 10saturn95
Wow! Another great chapter! I didn't realize it had been so long since the last one, but when I saw the update notification, I was like 'Yes!'.
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that you did a great job once again :) I always find myself referring back to voice actors from the old show when I read the dialogue between the friends because of how well you portray each of the characters. I can't wait to see what other drama unfolds as time goes on. For some reason I have a feeling that something major is going to happen between D.A. and Janet over the vote count. Also, I can't shake the feeling that Tim might really try to get between Arnold and Phoebe, since there's already indication that he's trying to flirt with her. But we'll see what happens :)
Anyway, keep up the great work! I look forward to the next chapter :)
Wow! Another great chapter! I didn't realize it had been so long since the last one, but when I saw the update notification, I was like 'Yes!'.
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that you did a great job once again :) I always find myself referring back to voice actors from the old show when I read the dialogue between the friends because of how well you portray each of the characters. I can't wait to see what other drama unfolds as time goes on. For some reason I have a feeling that something major is going to happen between D.A. and Janet over the vote count. Also, I can't shake the feeling that Tim might really try to get between Arnold and Phoebe, since there's already indication that he's trying to flirt with her. But we'll see what happens :)
Anyway, keep up the great work! I look forward to the next chapter :)
9/2/2019 c13 TheChosenFangirl37
I really hope you continue the D.A. triangle cause I’d be happy to see that play out either way. Usually I’m 100% DA and Carlos but with your story I can see Ralphie. But if Tim even tries to mess with Phoebe and Arnold’s aka my OTP he will catch these hands!
I really hope you continue the D.A. triangle cause I’d be happy to see that play out either way. Usually I’m 100% DA and Carlos but with your story I can see Ralphie. But if Tim even tries to mess with Phoebe and Arnold’s aka my OTP he will catch these hands!
9/2/2019 c11 TheChosenFangirl37
I LOVE IT SO MUCH ! Just a question, is this the same universe as the Phoebe/DA story and the bromance story?
I LOVE IT SO MUCH ! Just a question, is this the same universe as the Phoebe/DA story and the bromance story?
9/2/2019 c4 TheChosenFangirl37
Wanda was always my least favorite in the show answer I love the way you’ve written her! She’s a total bitch and i hate her!
Wanda was always my least favorite in the show answer I love the way you’ve written her! She’s a total bitch and i hate her!
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6/6/2019 c15 6NVSB32
Arnold and Phoebe's disagreement about spending money reminds me so much of my last relationship it's scary. :/
Poor Tim. You try so hard to hide it, but you just can't, especially at that age.
Of course Wanda's nicknames for the girls all involve the word bitch.
I don't remember the Paris of people line, but I definitely remember the human equivalent of the 100 emoji line. I'm still leaning more towards Wanda being Gina, and Keesha being Rosa, but reasonable people can disagree. ;)
Cool description of Phoebe's plant experience. I always wondered how all that shape shifting must have felt.
DA's dilemma just makes me think of the Crazy Ex-Girlfriend song "The Math of Love Triangles."
Arnold and Phoebe's disagreement about spending money reminds me so much of my last relationship it's scary. :/
Poor Tim. You try so hard to hide it, but you just can't, especially at that age.
Of course Wanda's nicknames for the girls all involve the word bitch.
I don't remember the Paris of people line, but I definitely remember the human equivalent of the 100 emoji line. I'm still leaning more towards Wanda being Gina, and Keesha being Rosa, but reasonable people can disagree. ;)
Cool description of Phoebe's plant experience. I always wondered how all that shape shifting must have felt.
DA's dilemma just makes me think of the Crazy Ex-Girlfriend song "The Math of Love Triangles."
5/24/2019 c14 No Name
I hope Phoebe realizes how much better for her Tim is than Arnold. If she wasn't so obsessed with Arnold she'd see that. Besides Arnold belongs with Wanda.
I hope Phoebe realizes how much better for her Tim is than Arnold. If she wasn't so obsessed with Arnold she'd see that. Besides Arnold belongs with Wanda.