7/7/2019 c1 Demi clayton
I think you should write , when you can as it is really good so for, but one on Jack frost and sandy time they spent together one he get used to the sand and being a part of the guardians family, as they see him that way from the beging of the end his guardianship, please and thank you went to that is.
I think you should write , when you can as it is really good so for, but one on Jack frost and sandy time they spent together one he get used to the sand and being a part of the guardians family, as they see him that way from the beging of the end his guardianship, please and thank you went to that is.
6/30/2019 c1 Demi clayton
I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.
I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.
1/4/2019 c1 lily
Love it I hate when people write bunny as an ass all the god damn time I mean he can be but not all the time
This was cute wish there were more like this
Love it I hate when people write bunny as an ass all the god damn time I mean he can be but not all the time
This was cute wish there were more like this
4/13/2018 c1 Sofie Rose
I don’t agree with your opinion about how the Easter disaster wasn’t Jacks fault, however I agree on your opinion about Bunny. He’s WAY better then that. If you want to know why I disagree with the Easter opinion, keep an eye out for chapter 8 on my story “Love makes us a Family”
But this review is for praising your work. So great job with this story, I don’t like these types of stories very much but I do like this.
I don’t agree with your opinion about how the Easter disaster wasn’t Jacks fault, however I agree on your opinion about Bunny. He’s WAY better then that. If you want to know why I disagree with the Easter opinion, keep an eye out for chapter 8 on my story “Love makes us a Family”
But this review is for praising your work. So great job with this story, I don’t like these types of stories very much but I do like this.
2/1/2018 c1 Just someone
It’s good. Just one thing. Even though it was a trick, Jack went to Pitch on his own free will therefore causing Pitch enough time to ruin Easter. I see where your going with this though. Was just pointing something out. Anyway I really liked this ;)
It’s good. Just one thing. Even though it was a trick, Jack went to Pitch on his own free will therefore causing Pitch enough time to ruin Easter. I see where your going with this though. Was just pointing something out. Anyway I really liked this ;)
1/25/2018 c1 1PyruxDeltax
Are you going to write a sequel to this where Jack finally tells them what happened when he drop Sophie off at home and after he left them on Easter?
Are you going to write a sequel to this where Jack finally tells them what happened when he drop Sophie off at home and after he left them on Easter?
6/7/2014 c1 59Auua Ytjoml
This was great! Very well done both in character interaction and in the writing.
This was great! Very well done both in character interaction and in the writing.
6/5/2014 c1 87Book girl fan
Nice. There are so many people out there with such different theories on what might have happened, what the Guardians would do, that I haven't really managed to sort out in my head what I think about it all. That said, I guess I love all the stories about equally, because I don't have my viewpoint fixed.
Really, that's a long way of saying you have an original take, and I enjoyed your story.
Nice. There are so many people out there with such different theories on what might have happened, what the Guardians would do, that I haven't really managed to sort out in my head what I think about it all. That said, I guess I love all the stories about equally, because I don't have my viewpoint fixed.
Really, that's a long way of saying you have an original take, and I enjoyed your story.