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4/2/2020 c50 tragicalconclusions
4 months have passed, I recheck almost daily for an update I'm starting to lose my mind LMAO
1/12/2019 c43 Guest
So I guess the story is gonna have a "Bad Guy Wins" ending after all?
11/9/2018 c42 45GroundZeroFirework
Wow...so I just read this and...wow...that was a wild ride from start to finish that I am in shock and awe. I really have no idea what to say that probably hasn't been said already. The fight scene was so intense and well made and I'm glad we finally know what exactly went down in Alisha's past. Anyway, I'm glad you updated and as always I'll look forward to the next chapter. Can't wait. Good luck...:)
9/15/2018 c41 1SonicProdigy55
Wow...It’s been about a year since I’ve reviewed and caught up with this story! It’s sooo great you still have the passion for this story!

I’ll be brief! WOW! THIS IS GETTING INSANE! So many characters and so many character moments! I’ve actually been waiting for Little Queen to make her move but now it’s coming!

I’ll try not to fall off for so long! You got me back into writing again! Thanks again so much for your help and I’ll be here waiting for the next adventure. :)
9/15/2018 c41 45GroundZeroFirework
Wow...okay...first of all, I feel like a kid who got her presents all at once on Christmas because I managed to read all the fics I've been waiting for an update for today and some really good new fics too. Second of all, I am so glad you updated. And third, I am so glad that the RosAli pair finally made an appearance in this story. I really like how in character Rose is and how overprotective she still feels of Alisha despite it being centuries later. It's rather sweet if I say so myself.

However, what did alarm me a bit was...that same overprotectiveness because personally I always saw Rose as someone who faces things head on so to see her pulling all the stops to get Alisha to unknowingly run from her past was a bit...off putting to say the least. But I'd be lying if I said I don't see the point in such characterization. It has been centuries after all and Rose's actions are only done with the best intentions for her wife so...it's not really a big problem from where I'm sitting.

Again, so glad you updated. I hope you update again soon. I look forward to the next chapter. I'm rather excited to see the showdown between Alisha and Leia. Good luck!
7/11/2018 c40 GroundZeroFirework
Wow! Four years already! I've been following this story for three now. I'm glad to see this story's still going strong.

This chapter was interesting. I really liked that exposition bit as to what Eleanor and the others were up to after the events of Berseria. And Zaveid finally makes his second appearance! Now that he's showed, does that mean Rose and Alisha aren't too far behind?

I hope you update soon! Happy 4th Anniversary! Good luck!
6/2/2018 c39 GroundZeroFirework
OMG this chapter is so awesome. I haven't been this captivated by a battle chapter in a while. The family feud has definitely piqued my interests. Plus the banter and skit at the end totally made me smile like crazy. I can't wait for your next chapter. You're awesome. Can't wait to see it...:D
5/19/2018 c39 3Awaky
Le retour! Très bon chapitre h?te de lire la suite **
11/18/2017 c37 2Heyenne9
I couldn't stop laughing at Muzet's reaction to Jude asking how they knew Velvet.

Great story
9/12/2017 c36 Milla Mathis-Maxwell
KEEP GOING PLS?!
7/19/2017 c35 1SonicProdigy55
Finally caught up! Also Hi Jula! Summer has been great and I'm nearly ready to show my story to the world! And once I finish this one shot, I work on the next story! (I promise it won't take me about a year to make like this one! ;))

But let's talk about this chapter! You keep on surprising me! Elize and Piotr growing closer, Julia finally becoming the monster we all knew she is, the villains bringing the Normins into their plan, and our man Gaius/Erston being held captive! Time for action!

Plus, I noticed that Morgana quote as well at the end! It makes me soooooooooo HAPPY that you love Persona 5! I have already beaten the game and I pray that game gets a Game of the Year nomination! (Makoto is the best girl for me, but Futaba is second best...Kawakami is a VERY interesting choice for best girl...)

It's totally up to you, but one day, with your awesome writing skills and deep understanding of characters, I would love to see you create a Persona 5 one shot or story! But it's totally your choice if you want!
Thank you for the great chapter and I'll see you soon!
4/3/2017 c33 Greasy Chicken
I was really excited when I saw a new chapter and I wasn't disappointed!

I think I can hazard a guess about the mural but i'm not 100% sure. I think this chapter was really centered on Rowen, I hope this doesn't mean he has any death flags, even if, I suppose, dying would finally make him accept that he has to trust the newer generations (maybe he'll die accepting it?). But the world still needs Rowen, who will teach Gaius how to operate his GHS?! More seriously, he might be retired but with all the commotion in Rieze Maxia - as in Gaius ending his relationship with Julia - the people will still need his counselling!
Anyways whatever you choose to do with Rowen is, I'm sure, going to fit with the other themes of your story and not only be written for shock value!

On the one hand I'm starting to grow more and more worried about Milla and her desire of vengeance, if she isn't cautious she could become a hellion! On that matter, I wonder what would happen to a baby if a mother absorbs malevolence while she's pregnant. On the other hand, I was truly happy that despite her grudges, she accepted the truce and partnered with Amilla to defeat the monster of the ruins. Even if she still has those feelings, she can keep them at bay when the situation calls for it.
I'm curious about Meizen, both about his hunch that something else may be at play save for Sekundes vs Maxwell war and about his character, he seems to be the big brother type and a kind person, what would happen if he knew what Amilla did that made Lailah doubt the prophecy? Also, what would happen if he knows his younger sister met the "current" Maxwell?

Poor Leia, it seems she gets a lot of unwanted attention as of lately, first from Melrose who went crazy about her arte and now that "new" guest... All thanks to a certain mystic arte - maybe some people managed to travel from Rieze Maxia/Elympios to Glenwood or the contrary?

Anyways, keep the good work and thanks again for the new chapter!
2/8/2017 c32 1PhantasmaXw
will the next one coming up? ;D
2/7/2017 c32 Greasy Chicken
First I want to say I had some apprehension before reading this story because I'm usually not fond of crossovers
But I'm really happy I gave your fic a chance because it's really wonderful! You write really well and the plot is interesting and not hair-pulling like some (bad?) crossover fics I read! While I don't agree with all your theories they are plausible and "could actually be canon" if that counts as a compliment
I haven't played all of the Tales of you mention in your fic so I'm sure some references are lost to me but for those I played I appreciate how you make things go together in some way, like how the Spirit World is actually born from Mint's protective barrier around Yggdrasil and how the knowledge about the world tree is lost in the Xillia timeline (i laughed when Muzét mentionned it being an old tree/thing), and Ratatosk's nostalgia about his time amongst humans - is Elle a descendant of his Marta, hence the name, or is it just a coincidence? I guess I will have to wait to know it!
I wasn't really fond of Zestiria but through the lens of this story I'm willing to give it another shot.
I also like how you give the Xillia cast new abilities (from the other verses!) to keep up with their new foes and I especially loved how you made the connection between Gaius and Dymlos, and Jude's with Senel.
About the future of the story... I really wonder what's actually up with Chronos and Origin, why do they want to end Eras, why Maxwell and Sekundes are even fighting in the first place, but I guess that's going to be revealed in a later chapter! On the other hand, while I am not familiar with Eternia (as in not at all) I understand Sekundes and Maxwell have a rivalry, but in your story Amilla is the new Sekundes but also inspired by Dhaos the Demon King - both (even if Eternia's Sekundes' fight was heavily inspired by Dhaos' fight in Phantasia) were defeated/fear the Indignation spell, is it going to make an apparition? It doesn't exist in the Xillia verse and in Berseria I think it's one of Laphicet's Mystic Artes, seeing how you gave to the Xillia cast new abilities and how you pointed you didn't want to write to much about the Zestiria characters, will a member of the Xillia crew be able to use it? It'd be funny for Amilla to be defeated by someone using Indignation and not by Milla's meteor storm, it'll break this cycle of "Sekundes vs Maxwell" eternal fight, even if in name (only) Muzét is the current Maxwell. Speaking of which, will Muzét get new artes/fighting abilities? I really felt bad for her, Amilla drained her powers and the only way they're relevant is through her knife and not through her own usage of them, but I guess I'll just have to wait and see!

Concerning this 31st chapter...
It's kind of sad to see Zoe turn into a hellion but as Gaius pointed out the first time she was beyond salvation so, in a way, it was to be expected. And yet, you've really managed to portray her more "deranged" side and how she always seem on the edge of sanity, there is a tiny light of hope with her interactions with Elize and yet, at the same time, it vanishes. I really like how you portrayed this duality without putting too much emphasis on her past at the detriment of her more deranged actions - we can understand what Zoe had been through but we can't forgive her actions, it doesn't justify them.
But now I'm kind of afraid for Milla too, with Julia around, she seems really hell-bent on killing Amilla and full of revenge, I hope she won't turn into a hellion herself! I noted in a previous chapter how Muzét thinks Amilla must be stopped but in contrast, Milla wants to kill her. I guess it's personal because she killed Ivar and Amilla is an alternate version of herself but she's, just like you wrote in the first chapters, starting to think like a human a bit too much and that's frigthening given the context.
Speaking of which, I wonder what Muzét and Gaius did to have Julia turn into a Lord of Calamity on them, she was (kind of) still able to contain her power a month ago.
Poor Elize, I hope she will be able to find a way to cure her not-angel-toxicosis.
Anyways I think this review has gone long enough, so I just want to sy that I'm pretty excited for the next chapter, and thank you again and again for writing such a great story!
Oh, and I really love your skits, they're just so funny!
2/2/2017 c27 PhantasmaXw
lol the last part.. edna XD
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