12/17/2016 c1 5Luke Dragneel
A good start, but it lacks more descriptive words when describing their dancing. As it is it sounds more like an exchange of hand gestures instead of the intricate beauty that it is supposed to be.
A good start, but it lacks more descriptive words when describing their dancing. As it is it sounds more like an exchange of hand gestures instead of the intricate beauty that it is supposed to be.
5/15/2016 c9 Maya
I like the story and how you intertwine your other oc's into all of your step up fanfics,and I hope you decide to write the next step up you can't or simply don't want to that's fine too,but I love this story so good job on it.
I like the story and how you intertwine your other oc's into all of your step up fanfics,and I hope you decide to write the next step up you can't or simply don't want to that's fine too,but I love this story so good job on it.
10/8/2015 c3 Amanda Djer
Hey, hello, my name is Amanda
ANd i was born from BOOM BOX
I dance, even when i have to walk miles, i dance, i jump, i slide...
I read music like reading your lips singing or touching plates for Dj set up
Omaigaaaad i just love it, please Make me one of you boom boxers 3
Hey, hello, my name is Amanda
ANd i was born from BOOM BOX
I dance, even when i have to walk miles, i dance, i jump, i slide...
I read music like reading your lips singing or touching plates for Dj set up
Omaigaaaad i just love it, please Make me one of you boom boxers 3
7/24/2014 c9 5LostGirl42311
I'm so happy she went with him! Into step up 4 next? Should be eddy/oc not Sean I'm my opinion.
I'm so happy she went with him! Into step up 4 next? Should be eddy/oc not Sean I'm my opinion.