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9/29/2014 c3 3Mystic Archer Horse
Having extremely long paragraphs with more than one person speaking a single paragraph is confusing. If you read her books, then you know how stories are supposed to be written. It has potential the reader can ignore your badly formatted fic.
The confusion may be why I am the first to review.

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