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1/1/2019 c6 2Plain Jane Pixie
Aw! That was sweet! RJ is good dad.
5/14/2018 c12 UP 2 TH3 MAX
Great chapter, can’t wait to see what you have in store for the next one. Keep up the great work!
6/23/2016 c10 5KrowMuj
Unexpected, but damn good.
11/28/2015 c9 1Anonymous The Nobody
Haha, I can totally imagine RJ wanting to jump out of his seat, I can't believe Ozzie got him to sit for that long!
11/21/2015 c8 Anonymous The Nobody
I love this story so much! Please keep writing.
9/18/2015 c8 Flaming Skulls
I ship these two now because of you I hope you know that cx it's fantastic
5/1/2015 c8 5KrowMuj
I was waitin' for the update. Nice work!
3/17/2015 c7 KrowMuj
Whole story is pretty excellent so far! Keep it up!
2/21/2015 c7 30Smitty91
I'm glad we got a chapter featuring Heather. She was one of my favorite characters. :)
2/21/2015 c6 Smitty91
Another really cute chapter from you. You''ve got the characters' personalities down to a T.
2/21/2015 c5 Smitty91
Personally, I think you should bump up the rating to "M", at least as far as this chapter is concerned. This was adorable and I thank you for the shout-out. I hope you'll review my own "Over the Hedge"-related stories and tell me what you think.

On a side note, I agree with starwars4life. I was thoroughly confused with chapters 3-4 being from a human perspective, and it would be interesting to learn how Heather and the rest of the family feels about their relationship.
2/16/2015 c7 14starwars4life
Well, I'll be darned...You actually took my advice and put out something not only specifically catered to me, but to all readers! And knowing the reason behind the humanized characters will certainly help in making re-reading those chapters with new eyes for myself and other readers. It's to know that the amount of authors on this website who take criticism well and use it to improve their writing and agendas as a result has increased by one!
See you around.
1/19/2015 c6 starwars4life
On the whole, this story is well-made. It's not only the best RJxOzzie story, it's also one of the most complexly-developed romance stories in all OTH fan fiction (and believe me, I've read ALL the stories on this site at least twice). But something that is missing that can make things more interesting and add to the depth is Heather. Her thoughts, feelings, and interactions (both verbal and non-verbal) about the concept of and experience with having two fathers (and their interactions with her) has never received enough attention, and that is a missed opportunity for this story. So bring Heather (and the other family members too) more into the story to make it better.

Also for the sake of being critical, in proclaiming my personal opinion, and in the hopes of providing you with ways you can use (or not use, it's up to you) to improve the story is that I'm referring to the animal versions of the characters, not the human versions which I find unnecessary and inconsistent with your other chapters. (I don't see the point of making the animals humans which is too odd and out of place to be charming, but that's just me). Fortunately, you've seemed to notice this since chapters 5-6 had the characters be animals unlike chapters 3-4. But in the end, it's your story. Do with it as you please as long as it remains interesting.
9/21/2014 c3 rock kick ass
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