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23h c45 13The Silent Insomniac
I've been following this fic on and off even before I got started on mine; I was actually checking in after missing a bunch of updates just to notice that the most recent chapter pretty much gave it away that the story is ending, and I'm... kinda sad to see it end.

Seth's story was unforgettable when you consider all the attributes you gave him as a protagonist, but it made the writing all the more an enjoyable read. I'll probably have to go back a few chapters as it has been awhile, although I do have a general idea of how the storyline unfolded as a whole.

I like the way you ended "A Troubled Soul" on a happy note. Even if he never made it back home, in the end it was still his choice. He chose to fight together instead of abandoning them to their fate, and that led to him finding happiness in a world that wasn't really his.

Heh, good luck with your original work then. Be sure to keep your fans on FFN posted.

See you around!
12/25 c45 Shuio
A bit shaky and repetitive at times. But for a good reason. One of the more creative stories I've read through. Not a favorite but I urge people to read it once just for how different and crazy it feels. Writing got so much better as the story went on and it ended up making the author grow along with the main character which just felt a bit surreal. Looking forward to more.
12/24 c45 StemmedGolf5
6 years man. Your story has been with me for about a 1/3rd of my life. It's absolutely insane. Your story was always something to check on, re-read, and smile with every chapter. Every story has its flaw's, and this one is no exception, but I can say without a shadow of a doubt the best story I've ever read. It'll always have a place in my heart. Thank you for working on this throughout the years. Best of luck with your writing career. God bless
12/24 c45 Darklighteryphon
I can't believe it's been just over six years when this fanfic was posted, it really doesn't feel that long.

While I will say I wasn't a fan of this fanfic ( I'm not really a fan of most average modern dude fanfics ) I will say it did something most average modern dude fanfics in the Spyro fandom don't do.

I will say I liked that you didn't have Seth help Spyro and Cynder fight Malefor, one thing most writers of average modern dude fanfics do is try to force the main character into everything in the story and this can make it boring so I'm glad you didn't do that.

I also like that you let Spyro be the one who saved the world and didn't have Seth take that from him, most other writers would have done that and it would have ruined the whole story.

I also like that you didn't make Spyro the bad guy or killed him off like most average modern dude fanfics do because both would have made the whole point of story feel pointless since he is the most important character in canon.

As for the ending I'll say my favourite part was Spyro and Seth's conversation, to me it was the best part because it felt like Spyro in that and how Seth acknowledged him as the real hero even if he was too humble about it.

that's all I have to say, i wish you luck with your own original work and I hope you have fun writing it.
12/24 c45 LoNeWoLf
This was a story worth reading for sure! Seth deserves a bright future waiting for him just around the corner in his new life and merry Christmas to everyone!
12/23 c45 Raider
This is an amazing conclusion to an amazing story. I am happy that you finished it but at the same time sad that it ended. I wish you luck in whatever you plan to do next, and if you ever do write your own book, and it gets published put a message on here that way if any of us are interested we can take a look.
12/23 c45 esines2017
Man...that was really good. These past 6 years have been long and I must say, unlike The Impossible Sky or Aimless, you really done a great job where everyone lived happily, even though Aimless is still going, after the war. And if this really is the end of Seth’s story, then I’ll hope that whatever you come up next will be just as good. Also, this is the best (early) Christmas gift ever. Thanks for making this fantastic story pal, and I wish you the best of luck in the coming future, and let’s hope that 2021 will not suck as this year had!
12/23 c1 Son of Anarchy Precure 95
nice
12/23 c45 UltraNova1225
This is the best story ending I ever, it shame have to come to end but good ending.
12/23 c45 7Nightshift the Dragon Shifter
That was the greatest ending ever after so long. This story was awesome and have always followed it! Will there be a sequel? I hope you make more stories like this again!
10/20 c44 1CC-7567
6 years and we're just getting to the final chapter now? I applaud how much time this fic has been around for. Wish you luvky on your next story. (Thats IF you plan to write more lol)
9/27 c44 LoNeWoLf
WHAT, a journey indeed. Can't wait for the final page before this book comes to a close.
9/26 c44 esines2017
This has been one heck of journey for 6 years. This story has been one of my favorites, and it saddens me that the final chapter is coming, but also excited for to see the end.
9/25 c44 Guest
Waiting for the final chapter to give my full opinion about this story.
Not gonna lie, I had my doubts and worries, some changed, some stayed.
9/24 c44 7Nightshift the Dragon Shifter
Once again an amazing chapter! Ever since I found this story I have been waiting for new chapters to come and it’s finally about to end. I kinda want it to continue but all the waiting was all worth it! I hope the next chapter won’t be long now!
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