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8h c410 716The Cowardly Christian
Once more, it's impressive how well you weave the narratives of all these different genres together...
8h c410 1RayvenShade
New characters galore! And these are just the Doctor's Forces! How many more will appear for the rest of the baddies down here?

Loving this so far! Keep it up!
12/27/2020 c127 Guest
Due to the fact that Hydro and Rain can control water, why don't they train together. Learn each others tricks and skills. Spar with each other. Maybe they can learn a lot from each other. The reason I say this was because both of them can control water, and if they interact, maybe they can train together and become sparring partners.
12/21/2020 c409 716The Cowardly Christian
It would've been better if Toriel had been more aggressive...but she IS the pacifist route in essence, so I guess that makes sense...

...what was that turtle that the beast feed to Six?
12/20/2020 c409 1RayvenShade
In the beginning of the chapter:
Woman Singular
Women Plural

Other than that, not much was done badly.

And now the Beast has corrupted Six, Who knows what her hunger shall bring?
12/15/2020 c134 Guest
Since Needy has Princess Bubblegum's dna, don't you think that Neddy has Bubblegum's Candy Powers, like how Bebe got Bonnibel's Candy Powers.
12/13/2020 c294 Guest
Patience St. Pim for reasons similar to Maja. During her introduction, her backstory and motivations involving getting the other elementals to use their powers was an interesting setup that could have been spun into a more involving plot about her history with the other elementals and trying to rebuild her "friendships" with one another, probably leading to a conflict with the other elementals later on in the series. Instead, she just freezes herself at the end of the elements arc, never to be brought up again, while the supposed conflict role is instead filled by Gumbald, essentially wasting any prior development on the former character for another character that literally pops up just as quickly as Patience vanishes, leaving any potential background and resolution for her elemental sub-plot to be desired
12/10/2020 c408 RayvenShade
You know, I take it back. This saga isn't an Amalgamate. It's the freaking Cluster from SU!

Cool backstory for the Gunslinger Lich! Didn't see that coming.

Looks like a big battle is incoming for the heroes. And even with the very little I know about The Binding of Isaac, I know the Mom is a big problem.

Also, I know it was just a name drop, but FAWFUL! YES! I love that guy. Let's hope you do him well.
12/10/2020 c408 716The Cowardly Christian
Oh, boy MORE of the Lich AND Issac's mom? This ain't going to be pretty...

Great chapter though. Sorry I haven't given you new updates lately... LIFE, y'know?
11/29/2020 c2 legendaryNOT
*does have magic after all
11/29/2020 c407 Zeon Paralysis Crystal
Wonder if monsters from YuGiOh will make an appearance
11/28/2020 c407 The Cowardly Christian
Alright, you brought in pedro! I loved that game!
11/23/2020 c406 The Cowardly Christian
Nice bit of lore and filler...you integrated them well...

You should probably EVENTUALLY have a reason why the barrier moved with them though.
11/19/2020 c392 1Vented567
Is Robot Boy going to make an appearance in the story
11/18/2020 c406 1RayvenShade
Obligatory Exposition Dump!

So, Asgore, Ballos, The Shadow Queen, The Radiance, , Gunslinger Lich, and Spirit. That's a lot of Super Powerful bad guys of varying alignment. And there's obviously way more to come. I hope you have this planned out.

This place has so many franchises mushed together, it may as well be an Amalgamate. I like it.

Issac, Hornet, and Six are Toriel's kids, huh. Well, I hope she keeps Six well fed, because that kid's hunger is a bit different from normal people.
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