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5/28/2016 c1 Kevin
What kind of leukaemia? Acute lymphoblastic?
5/2/2015 c1 17MantaI-305Apollo'sChariot
I'm glad Margo got better at the end.:) That would have been really sad if she'd actually died...
1/18/2015 c1 lurkingthotdestroyer
First, although the story itself (as usual) was rushed, the last part was WAY too rushed. Second, you should've made a full length multi-chapter story out of this. It has a lot more potential that you're no using.

Also I'm noticing a lot that your stories are very rushed all the time. You have great ideas, but there just too big to cut up into pieces and shove them into a oneshot. It's just not meant to be. Try making more than just oneshots; you'll get more praise, attention, and you'll look better in terms of literature (or fanfiction). Oneshots all the time are just bringing you down.
1/7/2015 c1 13Jacqlynn-Frost
It's a sad story.. I'm glad that Margo ended up getting better though. It broke my heart when Gru had to tell the other two girls about her having cancer to be honest. Not to bad of a story.
12/13/2014 c1 37TMNT 2012 Fan Girl
Awwwwwwww... That was sad when Agnes said it wasn't fair. That whole part was sad. :( Especially the Minions hoping Margo got better, that was so sweet. :) Good story!

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