5/18/2015 c2 33LobbyLane
This was very good... I hope some more chapters will follow :) I really like your writing-style also... Looking forward to read more from you ;)
This was very good... I hope some more chapters will follow :) I really like your writing-style also... Looking forward to read more from you ;)
10/2/2014 c2 Arabella
wow... very dramatically written but in a good way, i like the details, the metaphors and the choice of words. The last sentence is a beautiful ending which makes sure you want to read more. And that is what i want, more chapters. I hope you'll write more soon 'cause i think it will be a beautifull story. Lots of love, Arabella (pottermore)
wow... very dramatically written but in a good way, i like the details, the metaphors and the choice of words. The last sentence is a beautiful ending which makes sure you want to read more. And that is what i want, more chapters. I hope you'll write more soon 'cause i think it will be a beautifull story. Lots of love, Arabella (pottermore)