7/24/2020 c5 33Arrow-chan3
Even thought it took a really long time, I'm really glad to see this story finished.
Thank you very much for writing this wonderful story uwu
Even thought it took a really long time, I'm really glad to see this story finished.
Thank you very much for writing this wonderful story uwu
3/13/2016 c6 6reppuzan
I don't know if you're ever going to read this, but I thought I'd write this anyway.
This piece (while it could use an editor or beta reader), is absolutely brilliant. Short, sweet, but offering a nice little insight into Xenon's ordeals without making it sound contrived or cliche. Honestly, this has quickly become my single favorite MapleStory fic on this site, and I really would recommend it to anyone.
Honestly, I wish you'd write more about stories like these, but by the looks of things you haven't been very active.
I don't shower praise willy-nilly (as arrogant as this makes me sound) but I really enjoyed this piece more than most tales on this site.
So finally, thank you for writing this. Honestly, thank you.
I don't know if you're ever going to read this, but I thought I'd write this anyway.
This piece (while it could use an editor or beta reader), is absolutely brilliant. Short, sweet, but offering a nice little insight into Xenon's ordeals without making it sound contrived or cliche. Honestly, this has quickly become my single favorite MapleStory fic on this site, and I really would recommend it to anyone.
Honestly, I wish you'd write more about stories like these, but by the looks of things you haven't been very active.
I don't shower praise willy-nilly (as arrogant as this makes me sound) but I really enjoyed this piece more than most tales on this site.
So finally, thank you for writing this. Honestly, thank you.
11/26/2015 c6 10Samjok-o
Thank you for taking your time to type this, until the actually backstory(more of it) comes out I will actually think this as the backstory for Xenon
Thank you for taking your time to type this, until the actually backstory(more of it) comes out I will actually think this as the backstory for Xenon
11/14/2014 c6 33Arrow-chan3
QwQ
I love your story! It's a masterpiece I tell you! QWQ
Keep writing more stories! :D
QwQ
I love your story! It's a masterpiece I tell you! QWQ
Keep writing more stories! :D
9/16/2014 c6 Pineapple King
Man...that's a new outlook on Xenon.
I admit, the idea of a boy, turned into an emptionless android, but quite fascinating for me.
Plus, I love the emotionless, sorta awkward on human interaction characters a lot!
Thanks for writing this story, it was wonderful.
Man...that's a new outlook on Xenon.
I admit, the idea of a boy, turned into an emptionless android, but quite fascinating for me.
Plus, I love the emotionless, sorta awkward on human interaction characters a lot!
Thanks for writing this story, it was wonderful.
9/4/2014 c6 NekomimiToree
Welcome to Maplestory Fanfics! I like how you stay very true to the canon material, but the ending was kind of corny and disjointed with the rest of the flashbacks. This story could be a lot stronger if you had continued the flashbacks up to the part where they found the memory discs.
Also, this fic is eerily similar to something I wrote in the past so I'm wondering if there is an off chance that we're inspired by the same source (Kingdom Hearts 2, and Kingdom Hearts Days?)
Welcome to Maplestory Fanfics! I like how you stay very true to the canon material, but the ending was kind of corny and disjointed with the rest of the flashbacks. This story could be a lot stronger if you had continued the flashbacks up to the part where they found the memory discs.
Also, this fic is eerily similar to something I wrote in the past so I'm wondering if there is an off chance that we're inspired by the same source (Kingdom Hearts 2, and Kingdom Hearts Days?)