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7/24/2020 c5 33Arrow-chan3
Even thought it took a really long time, I'm really glad to see this story finished.
Thank you very much for writing this wonderful story uwu
3/13/2016 c6 6reppuzan
I don't know if you're ever going to read this, but I thought I'd write this anyway.

This piece (while it could use an editor or beta reader), is absolutely brilliant. Short, sweet, but offering a nice little insight into Xenon's ordeals without making it sound contrived or cliche. Honestly, this has quickly become my single favorite MapleStory fic on this site, and I really would recommend it to anyone.

Honestly, I wish you'd write more about stories like these, but by the looks of things you haven't been very active.

I don't shower praise willy-nilly (as arrogant as this makes me sound) but I really enjoyed this piece more than most tales on this site.

So finally, thank you for writing this. Honestly, thank you.
11/26/2015 c6 10Samjok-o
Thank you for taking your time to type this, until the actually backstory(more of it) comes out I will actually think this as the backstory for Xenon
11/14/2014 c6 33Arrow-chan3
QwQ
I love your story! It's a masterpiece I tell you! QWQ
Keep writing more stories! :D
9/16/2014 c6 Pineapple King
Man...that's a new outlook on Xenon.

I admit, the idea of a boy, turned into an emptionless android, but quite fascinating for me.

Plus, I love the emotionless, sorta awkward on human interaction characters a lot!

Thanks for writing this story, it was wonderful.
9/4/2014 c6 NekomimiToree
Welcome to Maplestory Fanfics! I like how you stay very true to the canon material, but the ending was kind of corny and disjointed with the rest of the flashbacks. This story could be a lot stronger if you had continued the flashbacks up to the part where they found the memory discs.

Also, this fic is eerily similar to something I wrote in the past so I'm wondering if there is an off chance that we're inspired by the same source (Kingdom Hearts 2, and Kingdom Hearts Days?)

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