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8/11 c216 3The New Shinka
are u okay man? u will continue with this story?
8/9 c1 Guest
my favorite thing about fanfiction is canon divergences but you make it sound like I could photoshop your oc into the background of the show and be done with this whole story here and now.
5/30 c216 7FanficFan920
Chucking Cozy Glow aside and just making it Stardust v. Tirek: Round 2 is such a "You" move.

Really good job executing this. I like the roll the Young Six had to play, hopefully now Stardust will be able to be around them every once in a while. At the very LEAST Gallus, since we know from canon he's the Captain of Twilight's Royal Guard.

However, Tirek is seemingly dead... maybe? We know that "Grogar" was able to revive Sombra, so maybe he'd be able to revive Tirek too? Will the Terrible Trio end up happening, and if it does, how does Cozy and Tirek's dynamic change since Tirek threw Cozy away like he did?

Really interested to see how Season 9 is affected by all of this, but first, CHRISTMAS!
5/30 c215 FanficFan920
Oooh! I love the twist where Tirek got portaled to the school. Now, the Mane Six can’t annoy him into helping them escape.

Despite Cozy being a villain being stupid, I can’t help but enjoy how diabolical she is and you translate that well here.

Even if Cozy’s motivations are flimsy, her actions are diabolically clever and I can’t wait to see how Stardust deals with them.
5/29 c215 7Nostalgia Cop
Oh HELL no!
5/29 c215 4Gamelover41592
0-0 oh *beep*
5/6 c124 ArtsyNoko
I'm really surprised you incoperated MLP before gen 4, wow. Now I feel like I will be missing a lot of insinuation from the gen 1, since I haven't watched any of them except gen 4.
4/25 c214 7FanficFan920
Okay, am I the only one that felt bad for Smilder just getting straight-up ignored?

However, this has been one of the better chapters in a while, seeing Stardust go through his parental anxieties.

Also, Father and Son by Cat Stevens is an amazing song.
4/24 c214 4Gamelover41592
that was awesome XD
4/24 c214 GracefulArt
Now this is the kind of ending I like! That lazy sorry excuse of a dragon got his comeuppance! Well done on both Twilight and Jack on this! Also, was there a reference to Kung Fu Panda 2 in the line at the end?
4/17 c213 Gamelover41592
awesome work on this chapter :)
4/5 c212 7FanficFan920
Hold on, we’re not going to see Stardust’s camping trip with the Young Six?!

It feels like when you have two seperate friends and you want them to be friends too.

My only big arguement is that if Stardust finds their characters lackluster, why doesn’t he try to improve them in any way like the Mane Six?

In any case, on to Autumn Blaze next week!
4/4 c212 4Gamelover41592
great job on this chapter
4/4 c212 kurolothgarian
say it with me so Stardust can hear: THE DARKNESS IS CAUSTIC GLOW OR WHATEVER HER NAME IS!
3/31 c153 17duskrider
Honestly I loved sombra's redemption arc it is fantastic.
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